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has scored 2139 submissions, giving an average score of 2.09, helping 8 designs get printed.
Looks flat. Needs more depth shadows, plus I would put the pen work back in the moon.
posted 10 months ago in WIP Moon hobo (Update #2)
I agree with the comments above and would also like to see the next rendition. Also, I just noticed something that seems I bit off. Is there something coming out of his mouth? Or is just suposed to be a scarf?
posted 10 months, 1 week ago in WIP Moon hobo (Update #2)
I tend to agree with the comments about the font, I would like to see the concept minus the text all together. Also, I find the central tree to be a little too much, I think the muted trees in background work just find with minus big bold tree. Nice Job!
posted 10 months, 1 week ago in you like this? please i've some question
As the design stands right now, I don't think it is a strong concept. I would suggest either changing the perspective on it and do kinda fly over view. Extrude the walls and have the pac-man monster eating their way out. OR If you want to continue with the tearing out of the page idea, I would suggest using an arcade version of the game as the background, then have the characters breaking out of the glass and the players running for their lives. I think the idea could have potential, its just the execution right now doesn't work. Hope this helps.
posted 10 months, 1 week ago in Suggestions on how to place the picture
I agree with dBarnes comments, though I'm kinda a fan of the text the way it is. I would suggest adding more elements to the landscape; birds, maybe old lighting, old parking lot with a few cars. Finally, depending on how you see it on a t-shirt or canvas. I think the colors spewing out of the one stack should fill the dark grey sky area. Nice job!
posted 10 months, 2 weeks ago in Please help me with my new design.. I'm getting crazy!