Profile for Malcolm Man - I know you're tired of lookig at this!!!

Malcolm Man aka Malcolm D. is a 22.59 year old boy, has been a member since December 23, 2005, has scored 4274 submissions, giving an average score of 3.40.

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Jul 03 '09 by Malcolm Man

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I know you're tired of lookig at this!!!

But please bear with me.

I was about to sub it when I finally figured out what it was missing. I wanted the image to have more depth, so I added some foreground elements that the kids could have used in constructing their friend. Plus, cat. Cats observe things.

Also, I think I'm going to lose the shadows underneath the characters. Although they look great when you view it just as a design, they kind of just look like blobs of ink on the shirt. They're pretty subtle anyway.

Piece Patch Friend V1

Piece Patch Friend V2

what say you?!

nonbloggerholly on Jul 03 '09 at 1:11pm

i didn't think it could be any better, but i think you did it :)

kashlen on Jul 03 '09 at 1:11pm

v2 is tenfold better. I'm glad you took the shadows out, and I really like that you added some elements to the front, I think it gives it a little more depth or something.

shirtflirt on Jul 03 '09 at 1:13pm

looking good

adorablepancreas on Jul 03 '09 at 1:13pm

awesome! I like the changes. and i agree about the shadows.

emilymmkay on Jul 03 '09 at 1:15pm

v2
meow

Malcolm Man on Jul 03 '09 at 1:17pm

We have shadow agreement.

She Dances On on Jul 03 '09 at 1:21pm

v2 for sure. The new additions gives your work more depth and adds a little more to the story you might have behind it. :)

supertrooper74 on Jul 03 '09 at 1:37pm

It's really good. The shadows are kind of blobish though, and I feel like the portion of the girls scarf that is behind the magnifying glass should be...I don't know...magnified? It's a small detail, but something I noticed.

Malcolm Man on Jul 03 '09 at 1:42pm

mmmm
good point.

emilymmkay on Jul 03 '09 at 1:44pm

oh I thought the tip of her scarf WAS magnified

Malcolm Man on Jul 03 '09 at 2:08pm

I didn't want to deal with it. I just moved the drawer over a little bit.

kashlen on Jul 03 '09 at 2:19pm

and I forgot to mention that I am, in fact, NOT tired of lookig at this.

Malcolm Man on Jul 03 '09 at 2:21pm

oh, well that's a good sign.

kashlen on Jul 03 '09 at 2:21pm

emphasis on lookig