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aka Paul Kohler
is a 27.78 year old
and has been a part of the Threadless community for 8 years!
has scored 3441 submissions, giving an average score of 0.70, helping 63 designs get printed.
All I have to say is repetition of those above me: the bench needs more detail to fit with the matches and gascan, and the shadow of the can needs to be going the other direction. Otherwise it's a pretty solid submission, though I'm also not certain I'd buy it.
posted 7 years, 8 months ago in burning Benches
I'm with the above for making the dog fit with the hanzi stylistically, and while I'm not sure if in the case of 'gou' the character has changed much, if you can find the traditional rather than the simplified character, that would be better, too.
posted 7 years, 8 months ago in Year Of The Dog
I think the straw's supposed to say 'extra tasty' but it looks a whole lot like 'ashlee casley.' The juiceline looks odd because the straw only has shadows on the empty portion...
It's a good design, but I don't think I'd wear it.
posted 7 years, 8 months ago in crazy bitch
More than losing one or the other of the languages, I'd just want to see this without the boxes.
posted 7 years, 8 months ago in Act Fast
On the subject of the math:
Some of those parentheses are unnecessary, but don't actually make it wrong, either.
I'm also fairly sure hortense was going for a verbal read-through of it, like "two shots vermouth plus one shot vodka over ice, shaken, goes into a martini glass."
If that's so, then the olives should be added after the big division.
All that said, I really don't care if you mess with it or not. It's still one of the better Extra Tasty subs. 4
posted 7 years, 9 months ago in 2 parts gin, 1 part vermouth