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asher27
asher27 aka Ashley Handlin is a 20.83 year old girl, has been a member since October 13, 2005, has scored 2406 submissions, giving an average score of 1.97.
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  Sep 12 '09 by asher27        5 Comments        Watch this      Share:  Share on facebook    Share on delicious    Share on digg    Share on MySpace    Tweet this    Stumble this    Share this on Kaboodle   
should i submit this here?
design i made for the shirtfight typography contest, but it didnt get picked over there. would it do better here?



btw, i know already from both emptees and shirtfight that the text isnt totally legible. i dont care – im keeping it as is because i have tried other ways of doing it and this is the best way IMO. to me, the overall design is more important than the readability of the text.

evan3
   evan3 on Sep 12 '09 at 1:06pm
i cant read it
well
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.....
asher27
asher27 on Sep 12 '09 at 1:09pm
welc
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jung
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or, welcome to the jungle.
Outlaw01
Outlaw01 on Sep 12 '09 at 1:11pm
Well, the text isn't legible like you said -- and that will be a problem during scoring. You'll get a lot of people going "What's that say?" and then hitting 0.

But if you can fix up the text, it might do well. Try making the letter edges sharper, to better define their shape -- and maybe give them an outline too to help define the letter even more. Any animals coming out of the letter can still pour over the edges and outlines.
kiiarella
kiiarella on Sep 12 '09 at 1:46pm
and i think you should use 3 letters in every line, so that there wont be any missing in the last line but nice, good luck ;)
asher27
asher27 on Sep 13 '09 at 12:22am
kiiarella on Sep 12 '09 at 1:46pm
and i think you should use 3 letters in every line, so that there wont be any missing in the last line but nice, good luck ;)

unfortunately that doesnt solve the readability issue.. and it makes it a bit too tall.
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