Lose the kanji.
For the love of Zeus.

first of all your description on... what you find hilarious is disgusting.....
regarding the design...
im not mucho of japanise letters lover!
so if you ask me get rid of them!

pretty colors!

on my description...that's sarcasm. i thought it was disgusting and its a message to him that i find him nasty.

and i removed them...so placement???

Ok, so sometimes, farts are funny. Or maybe it's just at my house.

The design... I think the first blue speech bubble should be farther from the beak, and should have no outline.

The second one should have the same line weight as the third one. And they should be staggered, so they don't come out looking harsh. Everything else is flowing.

Keep the kanji, some people's opinion on it may not be the average consensus. I think it all goes nicely together. It's your vision.

Ok, the blue kanji would look better if it echoed the solid inside / floating outline style as the blue bubbles.

I like what you've done with the brown below, it has a nice aesthetic, as well as the treatment of the leaves.

The only thing that bothers me about the bamboo (?) is that bamboo stalks don't bend like that when they grow. Something angular would look more natural, or, keep it if you really like it. Who says it has to be realistic?

I really like this.

And I think lower left would be sweet.

^ thank you
i did have the blue kanji filled in but for some reason it didn't save so whatever but that's how it is....love the suggestion

feedback?

cool branch and leaves, the curve of the peacock's back seems a little rough to me but perhaps that's how you want it.

good use of color

last time, thanks about the colour thingys...now ideas for placement??

hmmm, I like the peacock, not sure it fits with the rest. the peacock would make a cool repeat pattern