Now that I have your attention

I made another design... for critique... someday I will actually submit one for scoring. But the forum is cold today, everyone most have started the weekend early. Usually I get a few comments pretty quickly after submitting a design but not today. Last I checked I was the last commenter on every design in the critique forum.

Here is my critique.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/29058/Head_Heart

Let me know what you think. If I go by the previous ones I have submitted for critique it needs more work. Let me know.