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byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird aka Sarah is a 21.59 year old girl, has been a member since August 31, 2005, has scored 1,295 submissions, giving an average score of 2.42, helping 23 designs get printed.
Possibly for "Little Miss Sunshine"? Comment, Critique, color advice.... Here

I'd adore some good advice mi amigos!

UPDATES::
With added noses & stuff
Less changes from the Original, in Green.
Less changes from the Original, in Red.

Semi final copy-- back detail in Green

byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 6:16pm
Bumpity bump.
iotadial
iotadial on Jul 28 '06 at 6:17pm
jelly monsters? whats up with the sharp knife? we all know the best way to kill a jelly monster is with a dull one.

Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jul 28 '06 at 6:18pm
If you could amp up the cute to make it more of a paradox, it might heighten the funny. maybe make the

head" area a bit more bulbous, maybe little pig snout type noses, play around with it.



Then I'd add a bit of menace, slant the butcher knife weilding blob's eyes into a glare.



Just some ideas.
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 6:27pm
Cuter&angrier.



Anyone else want to halp out a fellow jelly monster?
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jul 28 '06 at 6:44pm
If you go with a red theme (which I'm imagining for some reason) dumb down the noses with a lighter shade than the outlines. They look decent, but they'll be WAAY too prominent if they match the outlines.
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jul 28 '06 at 6:45pm
same with the unibrow and eyebrows on sinister gelatinous
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 6:48pm
Cool. I'm gonna colorize and work out some of the kinks, then i'll repost. Thanks for your help!
iotadial
iotadial on Jul 28 '06 at 6:50pm
yes i like these improvements. and i was kidding earlier
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Jul 28 '06 at 6:56pm
You're welcome. I only hope it's for the better.



Pay it forward. (help me out with my WIPs)
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 8:03pm
Ch-Ch-Ch-Ch-Ch-Ch-Check it out!
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 8:30pm
Pur-lease? ♥ My jelly monsters heart you.
speedyjvw
   speedyjvw on Jul 28 '06 at 8:30pm
green for sure

like it for sure
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 9:19pm
More advice on the newest one- with the back detail?
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 9:28pm
Bump. I'll score your designs, slogans or whatever if you help me out.
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 10:09pm
Help a sister out?
Alex_Rogers
Alex_Rogers on Jul 28 '06 at 10:27pm
i like it!... without the noses
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 10:32pm
I agree- the noses remind me too much of Diglet and from pokemon.Mankey from POKEMON!



Even though i adore pokemon.
byebyeblackbird
byebyeblackbird on Jul 28 '06 at 10:33pm
haha... That is Diglet and Mankey from Pokemon.
9 days later
seadoubleu
seadoubleu on Aug 07 '06 at 5:10pm
i like the green.
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