I would appreciate your thoughts and feelings on my first design here. I have not submitted it yet because I am hoping you can give me some tips on how to improve it. I am not a designer by nature; I am a writer so this is a pretty big jump for me. If ya hate it or love it I would love the constructiveness of actually feedback. I have only been a member of this site for a short while but I think I have already built up a friendship with a few people (or maybe I have arch enemys in the making, who knows?).
The title is "always wear underwear".

I am brand spanking new to threadless and I think I am in love. I already scored every single tshirt and I'm fixing to submit some of my own. I love this place :)

Just wanted to say HI!

-Josh