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staffell aka mputaoin!! is a 25.78 year old boy, has been a member since August 15, 2005, has scored 33665 submissions, giving an average score of 1.28.

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Oct 25 '09 by staffell

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WIP: Negative Space

Does it work? Or is it too tenuous?

gumbolimbo on Oct 25 '09 at 11:09am

tenuous /ˈtɛnyuəs/ Show Spelled Pronunciation [ten-yoo-uhs] Show IPA
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–adjective
1. thin or slender in form, as a thread.
2. lacking a sound basis, as reasoning; unsubstantiated; weak: a tenuous argument.
3. thin in consistency; rare or rarefied.
4. of slight importance or significance; unsubstantial: He holds a rather tenuous position in history.
5. lacking in clarity; vague: He gave a rather tenuous account of his past life.

tenuous as in thin (lines)?
or meaning 3?
or m eaning 4 (vague)

*has enlgish poor*

shirtflirt on Oct 25 '09 at 11:14am

hahahaha

jamesf on Oct 25 '09 at 11:31am

could you have the great bear telling the little bear (or whatever it is) that if sucks. Or maybe the twins? What are they, gemini?

tracerbullet on Oct 25 '09 at 11:40am

i agree with james. i think it would work better if it had some kind of context, like the twins talking to each other or something

tracerbullet on Oct 25 '09 at 11:41am

or maybe even change the concept a bit and have two people looking up at the night sky and one of them pointing that out to the other

staffell on Oct 26 '09 at 3:10pm

thanks for the input...this was only a semi-serious idea...I like the idea of space being negative, but maybe the message is too strong?

staffell on Oct 26 '09 at 3:10pm

oh and @ gumbo - i meant tenuous as in, without the title, it's impossible to get

greenttentacle on Oct 26 '09 at 4:06pm

heheh - that's great. i like it now, but what about trying to make a few of the linking stars bigger and therefore not needing the yellow lines? i think it would be difficult to "get" without the title