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sarahrae
sarahrae aka Sarah Rae is a 32.39 year old girl, has been a member since August 11, 2005, has scored 7,500 submissions, giving an average score of 0.92, helping 30 designs get printed.
***This has been brought back to the top of forum since most people would have missed it over the weekend****

Alright kids... I need some help.

I have been working with a few color choices for my next submission, and I was looking to get some feedback for it.

Was also checking to see if this type of design is something that anyone is interested in. (I tend to like odd things, so I thought it safe to check since there aren't any submissions out there like this)

So gimmie some feedback (and Ben and Jerry's ice cream, cause I could go for some right now!)

Thanks in advance!
*edited* (Should it have text?)









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gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 8:41pm
I like the blue one, but somehow the whole design reminds me of Third Reich's Strength Thru Joy campaigns, it's not your fault, I'm a demented wreck I confess.
MoniqueH
MoniqueH on Sep 23 '05 at 8:42pm
Oh, I like that. The record player looks a little flat compared to the kids though. Eh, er like...



don’t listen to me.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 8:43pm
haha, no alot of those old posters were totally rad, I'll take it as a compliment I think.



I was trying to decide if it needs text or not?



Something like, "Little Sally discovers Death Metal."



I dunno...just thinkin....
gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 8:47pm
ha, great, what about "let's play this record backwards and see what demons we summon" or "let's play this record backwards and ask Captain Howdy for advice" as a title?
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 8:47pm
the brown fits the design.... kinda of a vintage look.

alot of the clothes and just about everything else in the 60's/70's had brown and other earth tones in it. if your going for that type of look (which i assume you are, due to there being a record player, and the style of clothes the kids are wearing in the design)...id say submit it on brown.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 8:50pm
xiv.... Brown is my favorite as well... good choice!



gerpander.... I thought about a saying about playing it backwards....i thought about just the word education, but that seemed too cocky, or wheels of steeli also kinda liked: Music for the Whole Family
littlem
littlem on Sep 23 '05 at 8:54pm
Ahhh thesnap, crackle, and pop of vinyl!
gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 8:54pm
It should definitely be about playing it backwards, like Slayer's Hell Awaits, if you play the intro backwards it says Join Us Join Us, so definitely go for the satanic solution here.

Immaculate souls for damnation here, ha.

Proper Evil Dead spirit needed in here for the finishing touch.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 8:56pm
haha....i like the backwards thing, but will I lose the votes from anyone not a fan of heavy music?



What about: Next stop, lip piercings and tattoos.
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 8:59pm
give the toddler a death metal shirt. the older girl a lip piercing and the little boy one of those huge ass black metal arm things... with all the spikes in it.
gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 9:00pm
Wise man once sang: "If you're not into metal, you're not a friend of mine"

Or for title: Next stop, John Wayne Cagy's garden party.
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 9:01pm
and a skull and crossbone sticker on the side of the record player
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:01pm
xiv i can't... then it would be trendy. :(



I would have gone out of the cute 50's children book era and into the hot topic era.



Although the thought of drawing the boy with spikes made me giggle more than it should!
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:03pm
yucky, no serial killers when there are children present hahaha, i would totally not win over the soccer mom vote (do we have soccer moms around here?)
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 9:03pm
..a metal version of this design would be awesome

xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 9:03pm
dam you hot topic
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:04pm
ok ill see what i can do to come up with a version like that... if the majority rules, then i'll go for it!
bramble
bramble on Sep 23 '05 at 9:05pm
The chocolate color looks extremely delicious :)
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:06pm
delicious is good... it makes me want snacks... the blue one makes me want a slurpee though!
gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 9:08pm
Yeah, delicious enough to get them babies in the oven with a squirt of mustard and sliced onions, mm tasty.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:09pm
no gerpander, we do not eat our babies. bad gerpander.
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 9:11pm
taste like hotdogs...
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:12pm
well that would explain the location of the daycare and the deli in my town....



*i just made myself cry with that comment*
gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 9:12pm
Oven's hot and ready, gotta get some baby rib now mm tasty
sailonsilvergirl
sailonsilvergirl on Sep 23 '05 at 9:13pm
no skulls or piercings please!

you're right about it becoming too trendy.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:14pm
thanks, good to know someones on my side!!



I think if I did it, it would turn into one of those shirts you saw at Target and you looked at... and then felt guilty for doing so. haha.

(i'm sure that only makes sense in my head)
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 9:14pm
the real meaning mehind Baby back ribs...
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 9:15pm
well sarah, you could always submit 2 diff versions...
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:16pm
I might... just to see how they fair.



gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 9:17pm
Oh forgot to mention in the heat of it all that I like the illustration style, tasty. *slurp
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 9:18pm
babyloaf with mashed potatoes
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:18pm
haha thanks, in my line of work, I get hooked on it easy! It's one of my favorite styles to play around with!



thanks gerp.
littlem
littlem on Sep 23 '05 at 9:40pm
awww, who ate all the babies?? I was so craving them...

:(
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:41pm
this thread is beginning to remind me of that episode of Futurama where they fry up all the Popplers.
littlem
littlem on Sep 23 '05 at 9:41pm
yum
gerpander
gerpander on Sep 23 '05 at 9:42pm
More Slurm to this thread please.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 23 '05 at 9:43pm
hehe... I think I'm going for a scuttle....
littlem
littlem on Sep 23 '05 at 11:15pm
you could keep it really sappy and call it...



Sally meets the Hokey Pokey
littlem
littlem on Sep 23 '05 at 11:16pm
or how bout:



Play that Funky Music, Biff Boodle
xiv
   xiv on Sep 23 '05 at 11:23pm
i came up with a good idea, but im not going to attempt to try and do it.



you should have headphones on the young boys head and he should be scratching the record.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 24 '05 at 6:55am
keeping it nice..... maybe that's a better direction to go?



I could make him DJing.... but I wanted it to be more of a... "ooooh... what's this" Instead of a "yo yo yo kick it" kinda feel
redsugar
redsugar on Sep 24 '05 at 7:16am
See Dick spin

Go Jane, see Dick spin.

Spin, Dick, spin.



Sorry, that's just what it reminded me of. I love the brown.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 24 '05 at 7:18am
that makes me laugh... alot!



thanks!
2 days later
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 26 '05 at 2:01pm
So what text should it have, or should it just be what it is?!! Thanks for the input guys!
bortwein
   bortwein on Sep 26 '05 at 2:07pm
I'm not a fan of the box behind the group. I like the design on Chocolate the best. The fingers on the baby's left hand look very strange and almost like she is throwing the West Side Gang sign.



An idea on about the color box behind the group: This might make it too cluttered but what if you tried a plaid pattern instead of the solid color. To help fix the cluttered feeling this might cause, then remove the stripes from the boy's shirt. I think a pattern in that shape may give more purpose to it.



Overall, I love the feeling that you have created with the illustration.
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 26 '05 at 2:19pm
the box was added so the design was grounded to something... adding the plaid... makes me nervous, ill give it a whirl, but the whole idea of designs from that era was to have them be super super simple. Do you think it will make your head spin?



The fingers gave me hassle on all the kids. Illustrations from that time period didn't close the fingers since they were usually just done with brush and then one color overlay that was usually off register. I tried them with round fingers and they just looked like sausages, but open like that they look like alien gang members. *sigh* Is there a middle ground?
littlem
littlem on Sep 26 '05 at 2:29pm
I like it on the chocolate, too.



sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 26 '05 at 2:34pm
I think chocolate has the votes so far!
.moto.
   .moto. on Sep 26 '05 at 2:35pm
sarah, how'd you get photos up on a blog....?
sarahrae
sarahrae on Sep 26 '05 at 2:37pm
using html :)



<*img src="http://www.example.com/image.jpg" alt="title or description" /*>





Just take out the stars to post, and make sure and change the website that you are hosting it from, and add a title if you wish, if you dont just leave the space between those quotes blank.



Hope it helps!

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