Profile for Auro - [Possible Sub]- Music Completes Me (?)

Auro aka Zack Batz and Jeremy Pinsonneault is a 22.45 year old boy, has been a member since August 4, 2005, has scored 7,618 submissions, giving an average score of 0.78, helping 62 designs get printed.

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Jul 31 '06 by Auro
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[Possible Sub]- Music Completes Me (?)

Nearly complete?

This link has color options and different things messed around with.

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Should I remove the staff and the notes from the shirt and just keep the background color and the cord? Opinions?

fb on Jul 31 '06 at 12:05am

The earpieces seem too low to actually be on her ears properly.

Frank Vice on Jul 31 '06 at 12:06am

ya the earphones are a little too big it seems, other than that it looks awesome

Auro on Jul 31 '06 at 12:08am

I'll move them up, I think i'll keep them obnoxiously large though :)

label on Jul 31 '06 at 12:12am

Very nice... love the colors...

:)

Auro on Jul 31 '06 at 1:31am

Thanks label :D

Anyone else have ideas?

Papaprime on Jul 31 '06 at 1:44am

maybe play around with eliminating the neck and shoulders below the shadow cast by the chin.

Papaprime on Jul 31 '06 at 1:45am

and, mayhaps, take out the base skin tone and place it on a lighter shirt (prefferably kahki) so her facial features and skin tone fade nicely (and keep the under chin shadow)

Gunslinger_ Extraordinaire on Jul 31 '06 at 1:45am

its very nice.

i agree with FrankVice the earphones are too big.

cthetiger@mac.com on Jul 31 '06 at 2:10am

i like this and i like the headphones big.

chenonceau on Jul 31 '06 at 2:12am

Reposition the earphones because they do seem low. But this is definitely a cool design. :)

Auro on Jul 31 '06 at 3:48pm

Updated.

Papaprime on Jul 31 '06 at 5:30pm

She's in a milkbath now!

I like the addition of the hair in back, but if you didn't play around with my earlier suggestions, I'd say try 'em. Just for yourself, turn off those paths to see if you like it.

ConcreteEvolution on Jul 31 '06 at 6:21pm

its beautiful!

you are one talented young man!

I liked it better without the hair addition- it looks a little like a mullet.

great shading and i love your colors!

well done!

Auro on Jul 31 '06 at 9:31pm

thanks guys, i'll try taking the hair off and playing with the bottom, anyone else have ideas?

byebyeblackbird on Jul 31 '06 at 9:43pm

Love it.

Auro on Aug 01 '06 at 2:02pm

Bump, edited some more.

Papa, i liked it without the bottom paths and with just htat neck shadow but added a shirt, thanks for your idea it did help a lot.

telaine on Aug 01 '06 at 2:04pm

i like the headphones cord, that's awesome ... maybe your neck/shoulder pattern there can break out of the lines a little bit?

They Call Me Special K on Aug 01 '06 at 2:05pm

the music notes look awful. if it was me id make the cord like a normal one and end the girl at her head.

ekaj47 on Aug 01 '06 at 2:06pm

the bottom one looks cool - add a record player bottom to her or a music playing device below her like she is the new style of home stereos/record players/cd players - and enter it for the wired loves threadless comp - future forward

just a random idea

Auro on Aug 01 '06 at 2:38pm

the music notes look awful.

Do they look bad because the idea is bad or because the excecution?

Telaine, i tried pushing th elines out of the headphones (if that is what you meant) and I personally love it :)

Ekaj, They're are already too many good entries in there that I don't think i'd win it so i'd rather submit this for the ongoing comp.

Auro on Aug 01 '06 at 2:41pm

Miniupdate:

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/6338/miniupdateea1.gif

littlelibertine on Aug 01 '06 at 2:42pm

wow, you're only sixteen? brilliant.

BlameTheSuburbs on Aug 01 '06 at 2:47pm

there is some spacial issues with the headphones and her face. It looks like the headphones are really far forward, and like she's leaning forward in order to keep them on because they are able to fall off or something. The two lines on the near nostril could use some tweaking so it doesn't look like its so upward pointing.

It looks good though. Better than I could do.

Auro on Aug 01 '06 at 10:36pm

tweaked some stuff and made more colors, I really need opinions on wether to completely throw away the staff and music notes or not, and what is and isn't working for this design :) Thanks again everyone.

12 days later

missjmelovesu on Aug 14 '06 at 9:46pm

i like the music notes

Frank Vice on Aug 14 '06 at 9:47pm

not a fan of the notes, but honestly i wouldnt wear this anyway

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