aka Amanda Thorpe
is a 24.83 year old
has been a part of the Threadless community for 7 years, 10 months!
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As someone said, the banner could use some work. Not the whole banner itself, really, but just the text. The font you chose was a good choice, but the text seems so crowded on it. Maybe go with something more spacious and simpler.
The overall execution is excellent, though. I especially like the contrast between the two images--The tank and bomber being shown with finer detail and thin lines, while the hearts with thick lines and more "friendly" looking, if you will.
I don't see why people are telling you take the text out. I'm glad to see that most of the people that have commented can see the metaphor/pun, but I doubt most people would.
I get confronted all the time about my shirts. I hate having to explain things to people about them because they can't figure it out for themselves. I'm pretty sure if you took the text out and I wore this shirt, I would get numerous, "I don't get it"s throughout the day. With the text, it clears everything up.
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