what's the significance of your points list? does that mean it was you who gave me points?

and i like the design. random colourful whimsical stuff makes great shirts

I like it, but not so much the eye/fish thing at the top right. It looks a bit wonky, not sure if that's intentional.

I'm digging the composition you've got going. I'd say try doing the eye graphic over again, or at least rework the current one. The uniform lines are visually less pleasing than if you were to vary the line weights purposefully. I like that you're trying to tie the eyelashes in with the rest through the lines overlapping the pink shape, I'd say push that a little bit more and think about removing the different angled eyelashes to the left of the parallel ones, which are a little conflicting.

Anyway, nice job! But don't stop here, you have quite the tee emerging but you're not there just yet. Remember to put it away for a while and rest your mind so you can look at it freshly and possibly notice something you'd otherwise overlook.

wether intentional or not it looks like you were going for dada, dada was an art movment that started in around 1916 and was based on the rejection of the prevailing standards in art, dada disillusionment, cynicism, nonsense, chance and randomness.

Interestingly enough, dada isnt art rather they called it anti art, if art has to have meaning dada strove to have non.

It's............. awesome! It reminds me of some of Dave McKean's Sandman cover illustrations. Even more--- it reminds me of Matisse! just lovely!

dam you cement!!!!
it supouse to be a surprise!!!
can you improve the eye it looks to doodly..!

oh it is supposed to be a surprise? i thought they were joking, sorry :(

: )

haha, idk is it supposed to be a surprise??