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I like the idea! Maybe try to add a few details in there (use a couple dots to represent the filament, etc.)? Other than that, very cute, and definitely the nostalgia vibe!
Thank you for the feedback so far! I'm glad you guys like the idea. :) I chose to do a spread-wings owl for it because I thought that it was reminiscent of Phantom's cape. I'm working up a more close-up, frontal view now. Also, what do you all think of maybe having this original design on the back of the t-shirt, even somewhat smaller than it is now, as an eye-grabber, or to make it flow more?
The lips convey sexy fairly well, but the hand looks more like a bloody handprint, which conveys murder more than sexy. Like I said, I think you've got a good idea, it just needs more, some kind of solidifying theme. Right now it's kinda vague and all over the place. Can't wait to see where you go with this, though!
(I have another critique that you can check out here and I'd love it if you took a look!
Very cool design! It does seem somewhat like it's leaning to the left, and I would love to see some color to it also. Can't wait to see where you go with this!
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