aka Chad Lockwood
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Yep, drop the text.
Yep, cats eyes are freaky. But maybe that's more of a talking point than a bad thing.
I do wonder whether the two elements are clashing a little because they're drawn in different styles? The girl is more illustrative, but the cat is more cartoony.
I think it needs to not be quite as simplified as it is. I think the figures needs some more definition, otherwise it looks under done.
If the figure can have some bulk, to match the bulk of the shadow, it might work better.
This design got rejected from the Sesame Street comp because it's supposedly unfinished.rnrnI was pretty happy with it: it's simple, recalls a memorable moment, and it even has a typeface in line with the era.rnrnWith less than 48 hours to go, I'm happy to hear any thoughts.rnrnCheers,rnChad
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