aka Jakub Foglar
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has been a part of the Threadless community for 2 years, 10 months!
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has scored 1424 submissions, giving an average score of 1.39, helping 13 designs get printed.
I see where you're going, but I don't think the community around here would like such a self-destructing tee. I personally find it kind of creepy. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, that's just my point of view.
Also, I think the style is little too sketchy. Good luck though!
Perfect drawing style, that's for sure. I liked the lighter versions more though. Also, definitely add back the fridge, that way it makes way more sense.
Also like it, the concept is great. And I also agre about removing the "wheaties" text. Second, what about making the "stuff" below him lighter?
And one last thing, I would do an ordinary light grey tee, not this one.
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