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TerdFergusson
TerdFergusson aka Brendan Kellam is a 24.54 year old boy, has been a member since June 12, 2005, has scored 1,224 submissions, giving an average score of 1.94, helping 46 designs get printed.
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Americana WIP: Please comment
I've been working on this design on and off for almost a year. I'm far from the best graphic designer, but I tried to play to my strengths on this one and made something way more ambitious than anything else I've ever done. I just feel like I've looked at it too long to really tell what's good and bad about it. Please give me any kind of feedback you have, whether it be suggestions for new ideas, arrangement, display or anything. I would really appreciate it!

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Jellyes
   Jellyes on Nov 13 '08 at 9:29pm
It's a cool design, but I'd never wear any map of America on a shirt
TerdFergusson
TerdFergusson on Nov 13 '08 at 9:45pm
Glad to a decent reaction. Do you think I should try to fit more in?
bsweber
   bsweber on Nov 13 '08 at 10:07pm
nice idea-- you may want to move around some of the objects though so they are closer to where they would actually be found in america....



the hollywood sign in northern georgia might throw some people off :)
TerdFergusson
TerdFergusson on Nov 13 '08 at 10:26pm
Thanks. That's a good idea. I didn't really have regional stuff in mind when I made it, but I few people I showed it to liked how the gun was in Texas and that was just accidental.
TerdFergusson
TerdFergusson on Nov 14 '08 at 1:13am
How do you feel about the shades of blue and red?
olie!
   olie! on Nov 14 '08 at 4:06am
I still believe this is the most accurate portrayal of America I have ever seen, and I thank you for that good sir
olie!
   olie! on Nov 14 '08 at 4:09am
also I would proudly buy and wear the shit out of this
Roostersauce
Roostersauce on Nov 14 '08 at 4:14am
what olie said
TerdFergusson
TerdFergusson on Nov 14 '08 at 8:54pm
Thanks!
Malcolm Man
Malcolm Man on Nov 14 '08 at 8:58pm
It's pretty great as is. I think following Brett's suggestions would be wise.



I think adding in even more "iconic" stuff would take this from great, to aaammmmmazing!



The more the merrier imho.
3 days later
TerdFergusson
TerdFergusson on Nov 17 '08 at 9:32pm
This is great encouragement! Over the coming Christmas break, I'll add in some new stuff. Too much work now and I need time to brainstorm anyways. Thanks.
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