aka Kevin B.
is a 27.16 year old
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has been a part of the Threadless community for 8 years, 1 month!
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has scored 4379 submissions, giving an average score of 2.03, helping 52 designs get printed.
I like everything about this, except the mugshot and profile. It's too photorealistic, meaning that the man loses any metaphor tied to him because I am thinking more about his identity. I don't know who the guy is, and why he is on the shirt. I can tell its a mugshot, and the colors give me the impression of orange prison uniforms, but having a recognizable face (even though I don't know who it is) seems off.
The face in the background works so better because of the missing eyes giving it more anonymity, and the transition to two birds, telephone pole, and broken wood pieces at the top (it also sort of looks like a graveyard at the top).
I find the objects to the right of the 3rd, bottom bird, to be out of place with the style of how the rest of the design is rendered. The objects to the right of that bottom bird contain lots of detailed lineart, which only finds itself in that one location.
Scrap this one, or create an interesting picture to express this. Your picture does not communicate very much to me (I know what the 3 mbps means, and I know that Linksys makes routers...), but even then, the average person/threadless goer probably won't know this.
Even with what I understand from it, I still don't put these objects together comprehensively.
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