I have two designs up in the Critique section, and would love to hear some thoughts.

"4 more?" - http://www.threadless.com/critique/86610/4_more

"Tarantuluv" - http://www.threadless.com/critique/87170/Tarantuluv

Thank you!

I have gotten a few suggestions that my Zebra Tree design [http://www.threadless.com/submission/250816/Zebra_Tree] would look better with the outer lines removed.

I decided to mock that change up. Here's what that would look like: http://www.flickr.com/photos/brookeduckart/4306031713

I agree that this would make a better design for the shirt. What are your thoughts?

This is one element I could clean up, if this design gets chosen for print. **Fingers Crossed**

Thank you for the suggestions Threadless community.
You're all awesome!

I am always looking for advice on improving my work. I am not new to design or illustration work, but I am new to t-shirt/silk screen design... it takes a bit of adjusting. Give me some pointers.

GO!

Many thanks in advance!