Not sure what to do with my slogans... Check'm out and tell me what I could do better :)

Thanx for any help

Just started voting and it's one of my PERSONAL favorites that I've drawn

keep a'voting guys :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/50803/Day_of_the_Dead

hey people :D

i've had three submissions make it in, but none printed yet :/
i worked hard on both of these designs and am hoping to see one printed. vote and show me some love and i'll return the favor with your subssss fo sho :D

THANX!