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• Thank you for your advice :)
  
  I guess what I meant was a more rough look, like a sketched with a pen look to add character to the piece because at the moment it looks like it was done in paint, the ideas brill but the actual image needs some style, and I'm not overly keen on the text either.. sorry, I'm not meaning to slate your whole piece, honestly, it's an awesome idea, just needs a bit of work! thanks for the help and hope I've helped a lil bit :)
  Jess x

  posted 3 years, 2 months ago in She's a minor.

• ok! thankies, I will get to it :)

  posted 3 years, 2 months ago in The Music Man

• good idea! The notes need to have more character and I rekon a more sketchy retro effect may work better.. its just a bit to clean and the lines too strait etc.
  Keep at it tho :)
  
  Please check out my critique :) The Music Man
  Jess x

  posted 3 years, 2 months ago in She's a minor.

• i meant sea!

  posted 3 years, 2 months ago in Foamborn

• Big tits arn't great.. they are annoying and make clothes hard to fit..
  
  back to the design.. I like the birds but I rekon a nice mix between land and see could be really good, can't wait to see the next version!
  
  Please check out my critique :) The Music Man
  Jess x

  posted 3 years, 2 months ago in Foamborn