That's red? Uhmm.. the first one is the best. At least for me... i'd just tweak the red-ish to be less salmony.

And maybe make the texturing on the actual structure of the hourglass a tad darker. I think it's a little bit too soft.

well I its "red sand" I wasnt saying its straight up red, I dont want it to be...is the "salmony" bad or just not the color I said?

i like both. suck it. i'd guess the grey is more wearable though.

DAMN YOU!

i actually like the green one better. the sand looks sandy-er

Grey for me sir.

Grey… :)

thanks everyone, I do have a version of grey with the yellow sand

I like the green one :) just me

very nice design anyway!

Grey for me. It's a neutral which makes the color of the sand and more importantly the action going on within stand out more.

Nice work by the way.

agreed, gray. fits with the style more as well... the green doesn't really add anything concept-wise.

there seems to be a hard edge in you background cloud texture: upper right & lower right. its more noticeable in the green version

thanks everyone, sent it into the derby, and I removed the hard edges from the halftones before I uploaded these, I must have upped the wrong file

ooops, I'm too late for an opinion, but lovely illo :)

thank you :)

i really enjoy the green one. It feels like a warm design and i think the grey cools it down too much. Looks awesome btw :)

I just created one of these too! But mine is WAYYYY different.

I love olive shirts, but I rarely see it do well for voting

ahhhh just saw it posted--nice--voted!