Critique?

Okay so this is my first design that I want to submit, and would appreciate any comments anyone would have for me to make it better

Okay so this is my first design that I want to submit, and would appreciate any comments anyone would have for me to make it better
Dreamspace
I dont get the concept/idea here.
Verdes
me neither
Ryder Revolution
it's really bland... i mean, i'm guessing you're going for an abstract thing... but it's really boring. BUT, don't be discouraged. Just keep submitting, you'll get the hang of it.
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