Love it. I'd make the tee an all over pattern, no guitar needed just a single colour belt print. Either that or maybe make some type out of it, saying "tear it up" or "shredding" or something...

I love the concept! And agree with the sir above: one color belt print.

Thanks guys, ill give an all over print a go and see what it looks like

Loving all the spam overnight :-|

Looks great on the guitar, I'd go for quick-brown-fox's suggestion of making type out of it. Tear it up sounds pretty fitting. Or if you want to stick to the guitar shape on the shirt, try making it a bit more loose, like the papers have been dropped there, roughly forming a guitar. A bit less perfect.

newer shirt version - I've only done "tear" so far as i spent ages doing a full tear it up earlier and hated the font style, so i started again. I'm not going to make the same mistake though, so just tear for now and if it's on the right track, i'll do "it up" later.

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i like it

That looks spot on, keep going!

Definitely heading in the right direction.

Thanks guys, ill finish the "it up" tomorrow just in time for deadline hopefully!

righty ho - new "Tear It Up" version!

so question 1 - which should be slide 1 and which should be slide 2?

Question 2 - should "it up" be over 2 lines as is currently, or maybe on one line?

Question 3 - does anyone like this and should I try include it somehow?

I like the slide with the shirt and the guitar. I like each word being on its own line. Maybe do the all over print as a regular submission on its own?

love the guitar and the full shirt wow!

hhhm, to all over print or not all over print... I am confused?

Like the all over print. Would suggest trying TEAR IT UP to look at too.

I'd include both tees in the presentation, hedge your bets :)

Arse! I put that on two lines! Tear
it up

TEAR
IT UP

here's both tear it up options....

i'm still toying with a new slightly less defined guitar shape as well but i need more paper for that which is on it's way home via my husbands work still !

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I have to say, it looks awfully nice on two lines.

thanks, good to know! I have to say, I fucking hate spam

TheInfamousBaka said:

I have to say, it looks awfully nice on two lines.

yep

digsy said:

thanks, good to know! I have to say, I fucking hate spam

yup

does anyone think a less defined guitar design like the very first shirt might work?

ok, new slide options with the "Tear It Up" type

slide 1 or 2?

slide 1 or 2?!

also, i'm thinking of swapping the guitars - the fancy one with the shirts and the plain one with the font... random probably insignificant question, but i'd appreciate any thoughts anyway!

I'm liking slide 2.

like this:

Ian-S said:

I'm liking slide 2.

thanks Ian, I plan on subbing 2 slides, i just don't know which ones or which order at the moment (I'm bearing in mind a lot of people see slide 1 and make a decision on that so it needs to be the better one)

Very nice! Loving slide 2, I think it really gets the idea across.

which slide 2?

I've got 2 sub options now, both with 2 slides in. just don't know whether to go for option A or B and if within those option the slides are in the right order?

Option A please :)

bollocks, i'm tired and i want to go to bed - with a vote of 1-0 Option A it is!