Id just like to know what you guys think. Improvements?

This is my second design I have submitted. It was done originally with watercolor and pen. I'm just looking for some feedback (and maybe some votes). Any comments are welcome, thanks!

This is my second design I have submitted. It was done originally with watercolor and pen. I'm just looking for some feedback (and maybe some votes). Any comments are welcome, thanks!
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