My "GEM JAM" needs your help! Critique and Share your idea please~ :>

Hello everyone!
This is my first Threadless design, 'GEM JAM'.
Please give me some critiques. Anything!
Also, I'm considering some text on this design...
But I can't figure out a great idea.. so your idea is needed!!
Thank you for your comment !!
Have a nice day~!
IzirAtig
That hand aint work
Limpid037
IzirAtig // Thanks for your comment! but.. I can't actually understand.. Do you mean that Is it better if there's no hand??
IzirAtig
It looks small end cuts of weirdly :)
IzirAtig
*and
ashtrashbigash
Lose the drop shadow, either add more textures or take some away, they don't match. Maybe play around with placement...?
Limpid037
ashtrashbigash // Thank you for critics. Looks Better?
ashtrashbigash
Yeah, I like the bread without the texture. Maybe try putting this on a t-shirt template so you can see what you have and how it will work on different colors
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