Love it! For real!
I would try it on a heather grey tee, and maybe just a liiiitle bit smaller.
also, as you said, would work on black, with the design on white, or a pearlish color!
Swing by my submissions if you like, and tell me what you think!
Is the text going to be a part of it? I saw the paperclip after I read your comment, but my first thought was a trombone (music note). The image is also very large on the shirt, consider maybe making it just a tad smaller?
Same question, is the text part of the shirt? If so, I like it without the text...it's a very cool design! I also think it could be smaller on the shirt.
I like the length. I would pinch it and make it a LITTLE thinner not the width of the stroke but the general width of the design. I say this because paper clips have one more internal loop and visually we expect it. Thinning it will compensate for our expectations. I love your design and concept. I also have this nagging feeling like I want to see a string of paper clips (string of notes) just a thought. Please know that I hold your design skill in the highest regard and just feel fortunate to be included in the design process.
jinshio
Music make work more fun (or homework @.@)rnhere a clip and music note consolidatedrnone color and white,silver or black colors tees
pelelopel
Love it! For real! I would try it on a heather grey tee, and maybe just a liiiitle bit smaller. also, as you said, would work on black, with the design on white, or a pearlish color! Swing by my submissions if you like, and tell me what you think!
TrkJac
Is the text going to be a part of it? I saw the paperclip after I read your comment, but my first thought was a trombone (music note). The image is also very large on the shirt, consider maybe making it just a tad smaller?
Ifellup
Try reducing the size.
dcschaub
Same question, is the text part of the shirt? If so, I like it without the text...it's a very cool design! I also think it could be smaller on the shirt.
Please give your thoughts on my new design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/107943/Villains_Squared
jinshio
Thanks a lot for your suggestions and no text it's no part of the design :)
jinshio
a clip with nusic note or a music note with clip form, thanks a lot for your suggestions
SilvaArts
Cute idea it seems like the paperclip should be longer, just a thought. I like the idea, good job.
jinshio
@SilvaArts i thought that also :D thanks
dnice25
Nice and simple!! yeah a little longer.
SKyle20R
nice and simple, i like it.
if you have a chance please go check out my new design. =]
http://www.threadless.com/critique/108092/ONE_MILLION
Romari Lepre
Simple and good-looking. I would like to have such tee.
It would be very kind if You take a look at ShadowMoon
arsen.karapetjan
Black and white good
See my tshirt http://www.threadless.com/critique/108087/Heartris
jinshio
paperclip as music note or music note with paperclip form. thanks to all
SilvaArts
I like the length. I would pinch it and make it a LITTLE thinner not the width of the stroke but the general width of the design. I say this because paper clips have one more internal loop and visually we expect it. Thinning it will compensate for our expectations. I love your design and concept. I also have this nagging feeling like I want to see a string of paper clips (string of notes) just a thought. Please know that I hold your design skill in the highest regard and just feel fortunate to be included in the design process.
kayas
Great idea! I'd do it smaller...but the concept is awesome! Good work!
jinshio
uh oh already put into the running :( if it's rejected i'll make it more smaller thanks a lot for your feedback :)
SKyle20R
looks good.
please go check out my updated version.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/108092/ONE_MILLION
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