In French the word "chou" means "darling" but .literally means "cabbage." I was inspired to make a cute t-shirt about it. The whole sentence is, "I love you my darling." In French. Do you think I should put the words elsewhere? Please check one of the boxes on the side when you comment. Merci!

This is sooo adorable! I like it just the way it is. It makes a lot of sense after you explain it. I say it is ready to be submitted!

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Looks fantastic, but I wonder what a dark green outline on the light green leaves, that are on the pink background, would look like? Just a thought. But definitely a winner in my book!

The light green leaves, esp. around the top, do blend with the pink of the shirt a little. Text placement is fine, direct and simple. Overall design of the character is very cute but maybe eye brows instead of a soul patch?

Submit it :D I can't think of anything to change, Good job :D

Lovely! Maybe add some delicate outlines and it'll be ready to submit :) You can try to add a small, typical french beret but it's nor really necessary.

I think that it looks awesome but I agree maybe a thin dark green outline, maybe the same colour as the darker leaves would look good around the whole design?

I would leave the words on the shirt just the way they are. But since not everyone knows French, perhaps put the translation as the title for the shirt. That way the buyer will know what they're getting, but not everyone else will know. I love the design! Great work!!

So you guys want a thin outline around the the cabbage or throughout the drawing? And you want the literal translation?

Wow nice job V1 and 10 submits and counting maybe just add some shadow in the back or down the character and just submit! Nice work!

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I think a thin outline throughout the whole cabbage to define the edges more to see how it looks, I think you should leave the type as it is :D

maybe add shadow and partial outlines, don't want to go overboard

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What do you think about a bit darker pink?

Ooo, I like! I do agree with trying out a darker green outline, but besides that, it's pretty much good to go! :)

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I darkened the pink and added a comma. If you haven't read the first comment of mine, the sentence means, "I love you my darling." Literally it says, "I love you my cabbage," because it's slang. It's like people calling each other "honey." Enjoy.

The darker pink looks a lot better, I think that is what it needed. Submit it, it looks great!

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Really like the simple design! And having words from a different language is cool when you can explain what they mean.

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Really cute! And I love the pun xD very funny! I'm up for you to submit this :)

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hahaah! submit!

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