Obvious inspiration and just a little fun!

i like the idea, but i think the hat should use a white highlight vs a thin black outline to match the silhouette of the body!

good luck

Like it. Simple and good.

Made me laugh! If you have time could you give me some advice on our design? http://www.threadless.com/critique/103402/Pixelight

Thanks for the suggestions, i will rework..

Here is a new version! Comments please..

I like the red one better where there's no white block background. I think you could round off the corners near the 'C' and the top of the car seat on that side. Otherwise, looks good! Please comment on my Sinful design.

i like the red better, without the box on the top. maybe make the design smaller and off to the left a little, to preserve the solid line at the bottom (like http://nouveaubohemian.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/madmen_logo.png) other than that i like it

Thanks a lot. All your suggestions are really helpful. I will revise and re submit asap.

Here is an updated version... thoughts please!

I like the clean cut nature of this design. I only realised what the image was on top of the text after studying it for quite a while, so just make that bit a bit more obvious, you could easily do that by adding white to the neck area! In terms of positioning I prefer the design across the chest. Thank you for critiquing mine!!

Cooool. The hand and the couch can have a gap of red. Looks bulky now.

simple, funny, i can dig it. maybe have the black stripe fade out towards the end of the shirt? also, will wearing it cut off my right arm as well?

LOL.. i can guarantee that the wearer will come to no harm!

Looks really good. I like the one on the left, where the design is higher on the shirt.

I like it....I agree with above that maybe have the black stripe fade out towards both ends would be better.

:) clever idea :) ... The only thing I would try is to keep the couch and the persons silhouette in black and see how it works.

Thank you for your scores on my designs .. very much appreciated.

Faded out the black band. Hope you like it!

Fade looks good!

nice with the fade but try to use a smoother fading curve.

please have a look at mine if you have time: things get clearer

Sure, will try that.

Slightly altered version..Please send in your comments / suggestions.

This version looks better. Very good. If you have time pls comment mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/104171/Oh_We_are_not_drunk

I like it! Awesome!

Cool awesome design!

You should submit. This is great!

nice design!

Very nice. I'd say it's ready to submit.

Submit it! i did some changes to my design. what do you think: http://www.threadless.com/critique/104509/Ice_Bear

I like your design though there are a few suggestions I have. The placement of the steering wheel it looks like a fountain shooting out his ear. Maybe removing this ear in the silhouette would fix this also the silhouette suggest he’s looking left but the hat is pointing right not sure if chilling with the hommies is the message you’re sending. I hope I didn’t offend you and I hope this help thanks!

Nice! Maybe some smoke on the cigarette?

I agree with josea26. i rather see it on a black or white shirt.

I agree with both josea26 and cmp27! Looking good otherwise, if you could look at my design it would be greatly appreciated!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/104550/Guitar_Strings

Thanks a lot!

this is better than the previous,, if i were you, i'd use color halftone effect to the black bar instead of gradient. just an opinion,..

If you have time, please take a look and comment on my design: Hipster Wolf is Hipster

nice and great

Good luck!!! Please vote on my design when you get a chance and support message to stop deforestation Stop the Madness! - Vote

LOL thats awesome

Here it is on a white tee as requested. Also, the half tone was a great idea! I have tried a few different colors and am trying to decide what to go with.

Any thoughts?

I will appreciate nay feedback on this. Thanks!

I like the white color. Submit that!!!

Good luck!!

When you get a chance please vote for a cause, ie to stop deforestation: Stop the madness - Vote

haha, this is my favorite out of the 3 you're working on! i like it on white.

White is awesome!!!!!

I like it on any color and white, but on the white T you can't really notice the cigarette. Love the faded checkerboard effect on the right!

i like it any color stays cool :D

White is good :) . Love how u have worked on the design :)

Best!!

i also like white the most - but the cigarette is not visible anymore. depends on how important that is... i'd stick to white

please vote if you like: http://threadless.com/submission/432727/things_become_clearer

i like the white tee. very nice

Decided to go with the silver grey...

good choice!