I had another critique submission similar to this but I wanted to change the name so I've made a new one. Which shirt do you like better? Any suggestions? Thank you for your time.

i like them both, but personally i prefer the one without the pattern, it shows the line quality more, i like the empty space above the words and how the words seem to blend in with the white shirt... feel free to criticize mine : http://www.threadless.com/critique/101680/Typography_through_surreal_eyes#v4

I really like the bottom one and the placement on the shirt.

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I'd go with the plain white. The maze is kinda cool but too busy for my taste. Overall a great design, though. Great typography :)

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Thanks! I think I'll definitely go with the white one.

Go with the plain white. The maze hurts my head!

the one without the pattern is the way to go it is a lot cleaner concept. Great work and thanks for the critique

Go with the white! It's cleaner and more neat :)

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Does anyone have any critiques? I definitely know I am doing white, but what else needs to be fixed? Thanks!

This is my new version. I chose the white version over the trippin' maze one. Please critique and also hit the buttons so I can tell if you like it or not. Thank you for your time!

I think that this version just brilliant!

haha very nice and clever. I say submit for sure!!!!

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Hurts My eyes a little but its a sharp design :)

great... Ready to sub.....

I love it! Great concept!

WOW! This looks really cool!

How do you get this printed on the bottom of the shirt, Montezuma? (Sorry, I'm new here :)

So far I only saw templates that lets you upload to a rectangle on the shirts chest.

Good Luck to you :-)

I agree does hurt your eyes a bit, but that is not the point. It's good as is, maybe you could extend the lines up the shirt then fade out??? Looks great anyway. Good luck :)

very nice

good luck

maybe you could try how it looks without the black spaces between "the" and "lines". also i like the idea of erica25, to let the lines fade out.

nice maze man :) no need for change man and thx for comment I'll work on shadows!

very clever and intelligent design..looking great..if u have time check out my design...

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Cool design...i think you've to submit it :) I like the black and white effect and the style of letters.

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Looks really good

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I think it's almost ready,but the only thing I would add to it, is lines, so the first thing you'd see would be that (the lines) 'til you go to the end of the tee and read the actual text :)

can you tell me what you think?

Ready to submit, sharp and simple, great stuff

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cool. I think it's ready to go :) The text is just legible enough to make it awesome :) I say submit it!

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Love it. Could maybe use a bit of color to make it standout more but otherwise I love the simple crisp design

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