needs something more -for example a statement kind of thing wiheher visual or in weords would give it that something-I like your werewolf but may need to be clearer around bottom of mouth
ps thanks for yer critique on mine
Nice concept used here, but more effort needs to be put in pushing this idea of 'animal within' to the viewers. Yes, you can put scratch marks and even bite marks into the design, but try not to overdo it.
Love it but more scratches will do better as anton.ostroukhov suggested, plus can add his front hand nails sticking on the tee, as if its trying to cut through the tee
i like it i think maybe if a claw was coming through the rips it wouldnt look so much like there is a random rip and more like the werewolf tore through it
Great image, but I think it could work better on a darker color shirt. Once you experiment with that and find something that works I think you're good to go.
Beautiful design.
I would try a different placement - place it on the lower part of the tee closer to the side. This way the wolf "tears out" of the body in a more natural fashion.
onetwotees
Hi guys,please critique this concept for me.
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needs something more -for example a statement kind of thing wiheher visual or in weords would give it that something-I like your werewolf but may need to be clearer around bottom of mouth ps thanks for yer critique on mine
spago72
Good, but I think the greys can be darker Thanks for your comment!
anton.ostroukhov
Hmm... great one! But more cracks and scratches will do this design even better! But try not to overload it with details.
And if you have time, I would highly appreciate your voting for my design. Thank you.
anton.ostroukhov
Hmm... great one! But more cracks and scratches will do this design even better! But try not to overload it with details.
And if you have time, I would highly appreciate your voting for my design. Thank you.
alllifeinfate
Nice concept used here, but more effort needs to be put in pushing this idea of 'animal within' to the viewers. Yes, you can put scratch marks and even bite marks into the design, but try not to overdo it.
aryanz
I like it, i think a statement and some scratch marks, mabey 2 or 3 going across the face.
Please let me know what you think of my design. Thanks
http://www.threadless.com/critique/101687/Clown_Spraycan
design98
Love it but more scratches will do better as anton.ostroukhov suggested, plus can add his front hand nails sticking on the tee, as if its trying to cut through the tee
Pls take the time to comment my design here
fllood
Yeah, nice one! I think the hole could be more like it would actually be on textile. Adding the claws would be great, too.
If you have some time, please comment and vote on my design.
Ryan Palaschak
i like it i think maybe if a claw was coming through the rips it wouldnt look so much like there is a random rip and more like the werewolf tore through it
jjaurili
Cool idea! I would add a claw as others have said to do. I would also try it on a different color tee. Could you check out my design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/101743/Butterfly_Effect
BobbyLinn
Great image, but I think it could work better on a darker color shirt. Once you experiment with that and find something that works I think you're good to go.
Please, if you have a moment I have a submission up for scoring and would welcome your vote – thank you.
Lepisto
Nice! But more cracks and it will be awesome!
Please check out my Laika: http://www.threadless.com/submission/416010/Remember_Laika
amielz
great wolf!!! should maybe lay some shadow on it close to the opening ...
check out my design - http://www.threadless.com/critique/101866/it_s_very_technical
KrystlYorke
ooohhhhh... fierce! perhaps improve on the tear of the shirt.
REALLLY GOOODD!! admire your digital works. :)
if you have time, could you help me out with mine? i humbly ask for your support.... thnx http://atrium.threadless.com/CBTF/subs/#/submission/grip/
artzoid
Beautiful design. I would try a different placement - place it on the lower part of the tee closer to the side. This way the wolf "tears out" of the body in a more natural fashion.
Please vote for my design here
Skalv
I like the design but make that cracks and scratches more natural :)
Please give me some SCORE on my design here :) http://threadless.com/submission/428714/Smash_Down
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