Montezuma300 on March 30, 2012 at 18:45:09 I'm wondering, should I change the letter color or should I change the letter size?
parallelish on March 30, 2012 at 19:03:51 if the slogan is going to be read between the lines, i think it would work better if you used a lot of different shapes close together so the negative space creates the letters
khanes on March 30, 2012 at 20:18:53 Awesome idea colors and coverage area! Not sure I like the typeface.
synthstride on March 30, 2012 at 23:23:56 maybe make the type bigger, im fining it really hard to read... love the 8 bit look http://www.threadless.com/critique/101497/Jelly_Fish
design98 on March 31, 2012 at 04:54:00 This is a great start, could you make the main title(the red one) bigger and the white bring down its contrast, so the main title pops out, Kip it up
Arinesart on March 31, 2012 at 08:05:09 As parallelish said, I would go with a negative space creating the letters :)
spago72 on March 31, 2012 at 08:20:28 Like it, but i think all b/w colors and change letter size! Great! Please, what do you think about my design? http://it.threadless.com/critique/101574/Monsters_love_their_children_too
Montezuma300 on March 31, 2012 at 10:29:28 Thanks guys! I'll try a combination of all your suggestions.
bscott01 on April 1, 2012 at 10:13:48 The word between is too hard to read also I would change the phrase to read between the lines instead Please vote if you have a chance: !Here and here! Also if you could critique my design I'd really appreciate it. Thanks
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Montezuma300
This is an idea that I really liked and inspires me.
Montezuma300
I'm wondering, should I change the letter color or should I change the letter size?
parallelish
if the slogan is going to be read between the lines, i think it would work better if you used a lot of different shapes close together so the negative space creates the letters
khanes
Awesome idea colors and coverage area! Not sure I like the typeface.
synthstride
maybe make the type bigger, im fining it really hard to read... love the 8 bit look
http://www.threadless.com/critique/101497/Jelly_Fish
design98
This is a great start, could you make the main title(the red one) bigger and the white bring down its contrast, so the main title pops out,
Kip it up
Arinesart
As parallelish said, I would go with a negative space creating the letters :)
spago72
Like it, but i think all b/w colors and change letter size! Great!
Please, what do you think about my design?
http://it.threadless.com/critique/101574/Monsters_love_their_children_too
Montezuma300
Thanks guys! I'll try a combination of all your suggestions.
bscott01
The word between is too hard to read also I would change the phrase to read between the lines instead
Please vote if you have a chance: !Here and here!
Also if you could critique my design I'd really appreciate it. Thanks
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