This is my first design submission! Any advice to make it any better would be great! Thanks!

cool concept/pun! add highlights to the shadows and shadow to the suit/hat. try and find a way to add texture to the design maybe. add grunge to the borders of the design to make the contrast less harsh.

Would appreciate if you could check out my designs and vote! Thx!

cool concept/pun! add highlights to the shadows and shadow to the suit/hat. try and find a way to add texture to the design maybe. add grunge to the borders of the design to make the contrast less harsh.

Would appreciate if you could check out my designs and vote! Thx!

oh and also notice the PINstripe suit haha

I would add shadows to the suit, but it would require going over the 8 color limit :/ but ill see what i can do on the hat

Added shadow to the hat.

nice concept!. i think you should add shadows on ground. and the size smaller. maybe place in chest area. maybe you can the back ones more smooth in order to give the effect they r rellay at the back of the middle. nice idea deserves little more work.

i would be really happy if you can vote and comment my design Smoky Whale. it s the last day for scoring! needs some help!

Made the bodyguard pins visible, added shadow to the ground, and changed shirt color.

The same thing as the previous version, just not on a tee.

The idea is very good, but i would improve the shadow and give some shadow at the body.

I would very appreciate if you have time to score and comment my Totem

Maybe have the smaller pin up a little more so it shows up better between the two dark suits. Or change the gray suit to a white (or some other color). Also red (bow)ties might be a little more appropriate considering the red stripes on pins.

I like the concept, and the newer version is definitely working better. The two pins in the back seem like they could be rounded off more though and maybe work on the shadowing. Also I'd really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on my design http://www.threadless.com/critique/97626/Floating_Park_Bench

I reckon that if the frony kingpin had a red tie it would set him apart from the ones behind him, as well as providing a focus and breaking up the colour schemes. You have some nice skills going on in terms of drawing and layout. Awesome :D any thoughts on my crit? http://www.threadless.com/critique/97710/The_battle_of_Folicle_Forest

or votes on my design? http://www.threadless.com/submission/387576/back_to_the_forest/

maybe the kids could have their guns back? Great work! I love it.

Made some touch ups and changed the whole tie/bow tie/color situation. to see on a tee go up a couple versions :)

Brilliant and simple! I think the pins in the back should have darker ties. Dark blue to emphasize the difference.

Vote on my submission, please! :) http://www.threadless.com/submission/388121/The_Engagement

Alright I changed the color of the bodyguards' ties to a dark blue and submitted it! Thanks for the help everyone! :)

Looks great.

haha will do :) Thanks!

Vastly improved for v1 however, I think you need a coloured tee, maybe a light colour and still tho keep up the great work and submit soon!

Please comment on mine, hope you have the time :) Full Inventory Thanks

i think is great, maybe a little more work in the shadows of the back pins