--This is actually a pretty cool idea. It satirizes Britain's surveillance well.
The bottom edge of BigBen could be a little awkward on a tee. Maybe extend the lines outward and do a gradient of color. Otherwise there's a large clock tower extending from your belt-- ; )
hey there...nice idea...
i think it could look cool if the tower would be longer and higher...try same placements on t-shirts to get a feel how it will look like on a real one..
ok have already fallen out of love with the layout of this, im thinking ill reduce the size of the tower so the eyes maybe sits below the armpit/nipple level the eye is going to face left and i might include a flying nazgul just for fun.
BUT
what do you guys think of the colours here? i really like the black towers and colourful 'haze' around the eye. what do you think?
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Zombie_nation
just a quick stitched together photoshop idea to show the basic premise before i start sketching.
what do you think?
based off a comment i heard on bbc radio 4.
Alaabahattab
LOVE THE IDEA! lol
Please rate my work!
Zombie_nation
i already have! yaaaay! (pssst you got a 4)
Zimo Art
the eye of sauron? awsome idea maybe the eye more yellow would stick out more and back ground dark (the t-shirt color)
Zombie_nation
good call! thanks for the encouragement and feel free to check out my other crit too
Kneez
Great idea. Maybe draw big ben rather that using a photo.
I'm up for scoring. Please have a look and score kindly. Leave a comment to tell me what you think http://www.threadless.com/submission/275259/Old_School_Rockers
Zombie_nation
seeing how people liked the idea here's my first attempt.
BoyCriesWolf
id work on the resolution, but this could be better. can you check out mine? Nocturnal State
BoyCriesWolf
id work on the resolution, but this could be better. can you check out mine? Nocturnal State
josethreadless
I uploaded a new version for my critique, if you have time please view and comment on my
design tnx!
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surreal_blue
--This is actually a pretty cool idea. It satirizes Britain's surveillance well.
The bottom edge of BigBen could be a little awkward on a tee. Maybe extend the lines outward and do a gradient of color. Otherwise there's a large clock tower extending from your belt-- ; )
Zombie_nation
who wouldn't want that!
Zombie_nation
think it might be worth including parliament in the sketch?
dominoPingu
hey there...nice idea... i think it could look cool if the tower would be longer and higher...try same placements on t-shirts to get a feel how it will look like on a real one..
Zombie_nation
hello, trying a bit of a photo montage here...see what you think.
thanks for comments so far really helpful!
AuNO3
It's kind of a cool idea but i think it would seem kind of weird on a tshirt. Especially the glow coming from the eye spanning onto the arms.
Zombie_nation
ok have already fallen out of love with the layout of this, im thinking ill reduce the size of the tower so the eyes maybe sits below the armpit/nipple level the eye is going to face left and i might include a flying nazgul just for fun.
BUT
what do you guys think of the colours here? i really like the black towers and colourful 'haze' around the eye. what do you think?
Zombie_nation
i'd also reduce the glow.
Zombie_nation
im starting to like this...what do you think?
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