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Very lovely. If you change the font I will give you 5$ ;D

oh yeah....that...that I will have to work on..I forgot to put that in the description. :)

haha funny

agree with the font part though..

less boxy teeth maybe..

great..thanks..your comment's really helpful! :)

WooHoo!

Great to see this.

I like it how it is, pretty clever I have to say :)
That cannibal looks awesomely cute and I love that desperate expression on the dude that's getting eaten alive XD
Funny, so funny :D

Check out new version of my party house design when you got time.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/58846/Party_Party
Thanks.

I'd like it if I read simply
"Cannibals, You Are What You Eat"
I think it sends the same idea, just simpler, with less text.

the kingofkings Got that. Thanks. I actually dropped "sometimes" from the original slogan. Anyway,I'll consult with my collab partner TimScribble :)

mobi Thanks :) Will be checking out yours in a jiffy :)

Great layout! I think there needs to be more contrast, though, between the teeth and the words written on them. From far away, it could just look like "proving that you actually are what".

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Meanwhile, This is a revised version :) I came up with a (hopefully) scary font. I changed the teeth just so that it doesn't look too boxy & I matched it with the little monter's teeth. I tried putting this on black but black is too serious for the visuals. What do you think? Honest comments are most certainly welcome.

THis has improved a lot.

haha..thanks...did a lot of reflecting too :P
But if you have any inputs, feel free to pitch in :))

hahahaha this is so funny i love it. good work. you might even want to get rid of the little dudes at the bottom because the mouth is enough.

please comment
http://www.threadless.com/critique/51594/Starting_Early

I know..i was thinking of that...I had to resort to a blue shirt since the little monsters give the shirt a lighter mood..I can't make the teeth too sharp nor the mouth too scary...Let's see...Hmm..Hm...Hmm..Thanks though :) And yes, I'll get to your critique in a jiffy :)

I like the little guys. Maybe just put one of them in the mouth and design the text around them.

Could you take a look at mine and let me know your thoughts:
Never Ending Flight

This is a really cool design, id totally wear it.
Keep up the cool designs and goodluck.
Check my critique out. http://tinyurl.com/ybuv5k8

I like the litte guys too however the mouth needs a little work, the left end has a sharp end to it that the right doesn't and needs some help..

also tighten the kerning between the "wh" and "at" in the word "what"

cool design! you could make a t shirt from just the little guys at the bottom! great job

maybe you could put the "cannibals' on top of the upper lip
and contour it to follow the outline.

critique mine ;]

Made a few revisions based on your comments :)
I'm so torn that I came up with two options. Let me know which one works for you. :)
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for some reason the top one i thought was ice cubes... i like the top one and the bottom one... i can see option b on a shirt :) i do think that you need to make your own text or something. maybe bones or something that has to do with eating.. pretty cute idea though :)

If you can take a look at my new critique i would love some feedback :)Hide and Seek. thanks

Cool idea. the people on top are cute but i like the bottom better i think. maybe change front and add a little blood?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59225/The_Hidden_Tattoo

i like the first one, on the last creature though, it doesn't look like its burping. could you make its mouth look that way? ;)
maybe make it circular?

critique mine ;]

Im thinking option 2. Just the mouth, maybe some more teeth up top. Just some thoughts.

Great work tippy!

Option number 1 is better :D

Pretty bunnies

Definitely option a for me, the concept explains itself much better.

Any feedback on my first design would be appreciated http://www.threadless.com/critique/59241/Do_we_call_the_Pope_or_Graceland?.

i think option a is better then option b for sure dude

let me know what you think of mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/58912/skullenator

I really like option a, they're so cute. It would look super cute if they were furry animals, like stuffed animals ^^...maybe?..unless they're suppose to be of a certain medium.

Suggestions for mines?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/59250/Puppet_Master
http://www.threadless.com/critique/59218/Tired_of_Waiting

I took in Killer Caboose's suggestion & came up worked on a new font. I think it keeps the light mood of the shirt compared to the previous font. I also changed the shirt color to purple so as to bring out the color or the text & little blue dudes.
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Thanks again to valorandvellum for the tee template!

I really like the new bone font. Im gonna email you here soon. Awesome!

personally i prefer V3 option A

I'm not sure I get it. The shirt reads as if it is the same character in three different time frames (like a comic book). What if he at something shaped significantly different than him and took on that shape in the last frame?

How about a little help with mine please?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/59216/Zombie_bits

I love it without any text there, but this is just ONLY MY OPINION. ^ ^

Good Luck

I like them all!!
just can quite decide which one I like the most.

me too..hahaha...

like this new font a lot
v4 ftw

Great characters! However, they do not relate well with the text.
If you wish to use the characters, delete the text.
If you really want to use the text, then get rid of the characters and use the big open mouth design you had in an earlier version.

i like it i mean i get the hole hole point of it

I totally agree with maestrostephent you should make the guy at the end a little fatter to show he just ate...

I like the purple and I raise you to try gray

like the new font

Good idea and cute design... Submit it!

And, please:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/58601/Life_is_like_a_Rubik_s_cube_not_everyone_can_solve_it

sorry, i just really am not a huge fan of the text. the font is cool, i just think that having writing is out of place here. that being said, i really love the characters, and hope you do something with them.

please take a second to critique my design; i will be forever indebted to you. thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59590/Heartless

I love it, I like the characters,
Please take a second to to critique my designClick here

Just saying again, that I think the purple looks really good.

great idea! I prefer vesion 3 though

Hi Tim :)
I owe you the new version! :) Hang in there :)
Thanks.
-Tippy

I think version 4 is the best. you should try it on a dark shirt. really nice work...

forgot
check out mine if you have times
http://www.threadless.com/critique/59857/Lyrics_of_death
http://www.threadless.com/critique/59337/High_def

Just did tager01 ;)

i really like it on bluee