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Instead of having 4 alien babies you could have just the one playing with the globe thing. I think that would be enough.
thx..funny..I have two versions and one of them is just one alien.
I put that on as well.
please, critique mine
Very well done!
I would wear this.
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is it suppose to be a yoyo? scale looks out of wack if so. like your alien tho.
thoughts on mine?
thanks very much.
what do u think about other background colors?
Wow. I think add some placement, and you're done. As a design, this seems very thoroughly complete! The concept is very unique, and the execution matches the feel very well!
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thanks :]]] I try to get that on Tshirt as well so you can imagine how it looks.
Nice! Maybe a little more on the yo-yo - they have those grooves that are a really helpful visual cue.
The alien is fantastic. I would buy this if my kids were boys.
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:] thanks you everybody, guess its much more clear if its just one alien and no more like the first version.
much better than the 1st one, good work
thanks for feedback. sometimes you dont see if working on it long time
Yep the alien is cool. Can't really tell it is a yo yo. The grooves would help.
thx.it wasnt really ment as a yoyo in the first place, it was ment
as crazy toy on the rope or wire or something like that. but maybe it should be improved?
I like it. 2nd version is better. I think the earth should be more toy-like, shiny maybe, and more rounded. The idea is great.
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Whats on his chest? Something is off with this. can't put my finger on it. its funny tho. i like the idea.
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well.haha its an alien so its different than us:]
Very cool idea, nice illustration. The colors are great
Thanks for the comment!
I didn't catch on that it was a yoyo.. I would definitely add some grooves as previously suggested. But that's all that I can really find fault with, otherwise this is perfect, awesome job!
haha love this guy! amazing :) kinda miss all the other little guys, but i think it could be great for a front/back or wraparound with the other guys elsewhere? idk but looks good :)
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great illustration. I think you should make it clearer that the Earth is a toy that he's playing with. It looks a bit odd at the moment.
Looks great. Fantastic idea. Like some of the others couldn't tell it was child's toy though.
thanks for comments everyone,Im working on the other version.
another version...tried to make that loke more like a yoyo..hope its better
please comment a tell me....thx
This is good, I really like the art. I guess to suggest something, maybe a slightly darker shadow on the far side of the yo-yo and maybe a bigger loop around the finger?
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Agree about the loop, and I don't think it looks like a yoyo yet...its better than the older versions but I think the perspective is a little off. How are you going to place it on the shirt?
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love the concept ,, 1,I would try to include more shades in the yoyo, 2, i'm not shure in the colours of the continents, maybe a green color looks better on it
I think it looks great. Maybe you could add highlights on the yoyo?
Cool style!! You could improve shade on yoyo and make it more realistic!
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I really like your illustration style. cool idea!
hello:] so here is another version of alien, I improved the logo.
what do you think?? thanks for comments
Improved the yoyo I ment:]
Very interesting concept, I like this version of the 'earth toy' the best. Maybe give the eyes a bit more definition/emotion? The pacifier design is a nice touch.
I think the concept is good.
At this stage though, the toy can be mistaken for just another normal toy with an earth print on it. So to remedy that, maybe add some small stars around the scene, just so that there is an impression of the alien being in space and the yoyo being the actual earth we are in.
Oops sorry for the long comment (you don't have to follow my suggestion btw), keep it up! :)
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I like the skin texture :P
Wow, i really like the concept of this :) I too feel you should add some detail to show it is the real worl, not just a toy, like stars, or the moon that sort of thing. :)
great thanks..I was thinking about stars,I just wasnt sure If its not gonna be too much
i think this is really great
just add some stars
and make it on light blue tee
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I really dig it, but don't put any stars, I think the design's charm lies largely in its earnest, simplistic composition. SUB IT!
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yea, I also would stick with a navy blue tee, sub it, its awesome