the emo one should be sad, the pompador one should be sexy, the ninja's eye's should be shifty eyed, the one with the tie should be angry, with arms up and jumping.
the emo one should be sad, the ninja should have shifty eyes, the one with the tie should be angry with arms up and jumping, the one with the pompador should have a sexy look on his face. the hockey mask one should have overalls, the sleepy one should have a nightcap, the crosseyed one should have one of those spinny top hats.
That's great! I would get rid of the yellow background though, it attracts too much attention, maybe a beige would do better.
Good luck with it!!
Any feedback on mines? Surprise!! hidden in the dark
love this! it's too cute and totally wearable
i can't think of any suggestions other than it would maybe be nice to see some other colour option shirt-wise... not to say i don't like the yellow, i just like to see what else might work!
This is adorable! Nice individuality to the monkeys, and I think the yellow gives it a lovely friendly feel. Love the shadows grounding each monkey too.
Maybe rather than the ones with only expressions and no costumes, you could have more characters? Haha like an Abe Lincoln one, yes!
victorbme
first attempt here. let me know what you think. thanks!
irishwriter
aw, it's adorable!
i think the effect would be even better if the pile of banana peels behind him was more dramatically bigger with each size change.
Chris Rowson
Looking good. I think it'd look even better if the monkeys' expressions were all different from one another.
Elevolution, please vote and comment
victorbme
switched up the design idea bit...created a bunch of different monkeys.
should i have more or less?
4wordsback
This is really funny but it needs a new title to work with it
check mine out when you can
http://www.threadless.com/critique/42273/Follow_Your_Heart
Tigerdog
Oh i love this! One suggestion. Most monkey are happy, some are surpiced, one is sleepy. GIVE AN ANGRY ONE ! :) I would like to see this printed.
P.S(the ninja monkey owns)
victorbme
yah, i definitely will change up the title.
any other expression suggestions?
Bluelunar
Yeah I agree, get rid of some of those happy faces and change them to angry, scary, sad, etc. :)
Please comment on my Poor Teddy?
abombloves
the emo one should be sad, the pompador one should be sexy, the ninja's eye's should be shifty eyed, the one with the tie should be angry, with arms up and jumping.
abombloves
the emo one should be sad, the ninja should have shifty eyes, the one with the tie should be angry with arms up and jumping, the one with the pompador should have a sexy look on his face. the hockey mask one should have overalls, the sleepy one should have a nightcap, the crosseyed one should have one of those spinny top hats.
victorbme
new title: "Monkey!"
The Perfect Fit
Love the monkeys and the idea.. Maybe make them a bit bigger.. They are all so unique and cute you want people to be able to see them.
victorbme
should i have less so that i have more space to show in greater detail? or leave as is?
IM LUVI TAT SPECIAL GUY
THAT'S NICE I AGREE WITH VICTOR!
CHECK MINE OUT
victorbme
As with v3 - title is now: "Monkey"
reorganized a bit, to allow each monkey to be bigger
FreckleTiff
Cute!
zap2d
very friendly feel
Alicia Fuentes
That's great! I would get rid of the yellow background though, it attracts too much attention, maybe a beige would do better.
Good luck with it!!
Any feedback on mines?
Surprise!!
hidden in the dark
Thanks!
digsy
love this! it's too cute and totally wearable
i can't think of any suggestions other than it would maybe be nice to see some other colour option shirt-wise... not to say i don't like the yellow, i just like to see what else might work!
any comments on my robot please?
forceofvolcanos
you should make an abe lincoln monkey!!!!!!
good idea!!
what do you think of mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/42473/Alright
victorbme
thanks for the feedback. it's been quite helpful
Ian-S
I love it. Nice work!
Please crit mine!
isolder
This is adorable! Nice individuality to the monkeys, and I think the yellow gives it a lovely friendly feel. Love the shadows grounding each monkey too.
Maybe rather than the ones with only expressions and no costumes, you could have more characters? Haha like an Abe Lincoln one, yes!
Any feedback for mine?
victorbme
Title: Monkey!
Added some color variations: Yellow, Navy, Heather Grey & Sand.
Which do you guys like the best?
carolxhsu
I love each individual character - super cute. But all in a cluster like that, I'm not really feeling it.
FreckleTiff
I agree with carol each one in itself is really cute. Why are they lined up like that?
Crit Me Please:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/42791/Tongue_Twister
victorbme
any thoughts on the color variations?
haleluiah
Verry cute caracter, i like sand, but yellow is ok too.
Please take a look at my design
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