Pipe Dreams
I sleep some nights and dream of pipes.
They stretch my limbs and PJ stripes.
They’re rusty, full of things that smell.
Where do they lead? I cannot tell.
Left as a sketch in response to the majority of the comments left on my previous subs. So, black and 2 or 3 shades of grey on white. Oh, and yes, the poem is on the back :)
turtle-lover
I sleep some nights and dream of pipes.
They stretch my limbs and PJ stripes.
They’re rusty, full of things that smell.
Where do they lead? I cannot tell.
Left as a sketch in response to the majority of the comments left on my previous subs. So, black and 2 or 3 shades of grey on white. Oh, and yes, the poem is on the back :)
marvelkicksbutt
hey dude thats awesome. kanda random but thats ok with me.
CHLLE
$5. The text on the back does it. Totally love the style of the whole concept.
Sunshine69
I like the image
ChubbsMcBeef
Great sketch work! Would love to see a version of this in colour though...
N2O
This is great! Nice job.
FRICKINAWESOME
Yeah, color this up and ditch the text, since it's kind of obvious the pipe dream idea. Really dazzling imagery here.
turtle-lover
When I do colour, people ask for sketches. When I do sketches, people ask for colour.
sigh
I'm never going to win around here...
Pixtoons
Make a book for kids. This looks like the concept would be strong enough for a whole story.
turtle-lover
hmm... maybe...
berrynoir
I would like some color. Also, I'd move the text on the back down a bit.
Huck7273
Don't change a thing! 5$
entify
Cheer up turtle-lover, this is great. Nice concept
alpha-fly
Fantabulous! Print!!!! 5$
Bloom Beautiful
I love back.
ming2882
Love the idea. Keep the black and white. The only thing is i think the text should be moved down. Any body who wears this with long hair is going to block the poem.
cityauctor
i totally agree that the text on the back sells the shirt. $
deejayflint
Keep the text. what's with you barbarians and text?
turtle-lover
Hmm... no more comments? I am sensing a low score in the making...
cactuschicka
KEEP THE TEXT! I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.
wheskey
very very very nice
turtle-lover
Lowest score to date. Interesting.
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