hahaha! wow, I actually started laughing at this. I feel like a loser sitting here laughing at my computer screen. And for that, I have to give a 5! The ONLY thing is, I don't really like the look of the bubbles. There might just be too many of them.
I agree a different shade of green, like Irish Spring would be best, and make the soap dish stand out by using another color. The bubbles are too symmetrical, and look like copy and paste bubbles instead of the way they would naturally occur - maybe just a few here and there instead. But honestly, it's much too fight club with the shape of the soap and the shape of the letters, maybe try an oval or something different. Funny concept, design needs work.
Excellent concept only needing a few
tweaks already mentioned above :
-- Make the soap and its dish look separate
or remove the soap dish entirely
-- Improve the bubbles
--Change it so it doesn't look so Fight Club
While I agree on some of the above comments, I still adore this. $4, and in the event this gets printed hope I don't get pelted by tofu when I wear this to my hippy school.
It actually took me a while to figure this out. =/ I didn't get it immediately, so I started reading comments. I was instantly embarrased that I didn't understand, but now that I do... I applaud you.
If you want to improve, I would make the bar/text at a different angle. It's a tad bit hard to read.
I agree....take away the bubbles below the soap dish, and make the soap dish a different color. Also maybe change the shape of the soap dish ...to look more detailed I mean. It took me a while to figure out it was a soap dish...it is too flat I think.
i understood as soon as I saw it what it meant...I think you'd be fine leaving it the way it is. I didn't notice the bubble count OR shape of the soap dish until I read people's comments. My first impression is how I'll score it...5
epilepsy
this is incredible.
$5
jpiatt
hahaha! wow, I actually started laughing at this. I feel like a loser sitting here laughing at my computer screen. And for that, I have to give a 5! The ONLY thing is, I don't really like the look of the bubbles. There might just be too many of them.
M. R. Murphy
it's getting a $5 but the soap and the soap dish need to be different colors.
shirtflirt
shouldn't be green if it's anti hippy.
but great, laugh out loud concept
VinnieCash
My thought was green because it's kryptonite.
Antangil
maybe a couple fewer bubbles, maybe change the soap dish a little, but I'd buy it as is.
$4 now, $5 with some redesign.
stuf64
holy cow, is that thing isometric??
groundcontrol
I don't think it is. It looks a bit off.
Big Ed
HA!!! Fabulous. 5.
But I agree, the soap should be more like aqua (like Zest) or something, not green.
shadowboy
Funny, but the bubbles look to me like someone left a bunch of pubes on the soap. Eek.
nanahachi
maybe a tad fewer bubbles along the soap dish, and the dish could be a slightly diff. color. but great design! like above $ 4 now, 5 later?
blowinbublesooo
ahahahahha!!
Easy Jack
Hahaha!
Bravo! Good work!
$5.
P.S. Keep the green. Keeps the kryptonite feel to it.
carrifaery
I agree a different shade of green, like Irish Spring would be best, and make the soap dish stand out by using another color. The bubbles are too symmetrical, and look like copy and paste bubbles instead of the way they would naturally occur - maybe just a few here and there instead. But honestly, it's much too fight club with the shape of the soap and the shape of the letters, maybe try an oval or something different. Funny concept, design needs work.
Ellsswhere
i have hippie friends... and i would enjoy this but the bubbles really hold it back, put some style into them and repost
melonpeel
some thoughts - like others stated.. too many bubbles.
Use just a few (3 or 5) floating above the soap. That will be enough since they'ld never lather it up in the first place.
Make the actual soap bar more stylish, not so digital-ish, but keep the lettering crisply embossed like you have it.
helo
Excellent concept only needing a few
tweaks already mentioned above :
-- Make the soap and its dish look separate
or remove the soap dish entirely
-- Improve the bubbles
--Change it so it doesn't look so Fight Club
Here's a reference photo to help out
http://www.desertblossom.com/Mics.%20File/mechanics/DM%20Essential%20Oil%20Soap%20Lather.jpg
You could also stand the soap up like this
http://graphicssoft.about.com/library/tuts/images2/tut11-19.gif
so it doesn't look like Fight Club as much.
And here's a photo of suds just for a laugh
http://www.mayvillecity.com/organizations/images/2004PC141.jpg
jesusinameshhat
Nice job with working with the proper angles!
AugustInNewYork
Ahaha. I love it.
Maybe remove the dish, though. It's still 5$. Wonderful job!
Citrinitas
While I agree on some of the above comments, I still adore this. $4, and in the event this gets printed hope I don't get pelted by tofu when I wear this to my hippy school.
lucyfarfort
Although i probably wouldn't wera it, I kike the idea and its v well executed
Themilkman666
I love you. I would wear this to piss off the hippies
isisi
yay :D really cool!
leftoverusername
The bubbles look like hair. But a funny idea overall.
Rustyglow202224
XD
AmanDUH
"The bubbles look like hair. "
i was thinking that tooooo.
W0LFIe
Yeah, change the bubbles a bit. They do look like hair.
And funny as hell idea. I love it.
Peachcupcake
I'd be on that kryptonite
Straight up on that Kryptonite
:-p
I like it!
toastburner
$5
bets52604
so true
streetwise
great idea, you should make this an actual product.
Efrain
the perspective is rare but the concept and the colors are excelent
goerikat
thank you fight club.
It actually took me a while to figure this out. =/ I didn't get it immediately, so I started reading comments. I was instantly embarrased that I didn't understand, but now that I do... I applaud you.
If you want to improve, I would make the bar/text at a different angle. It's a tad bit hard to read.
janell6267
I agree....take away the bubbles below the soap dish, and make the soap dish a different color. Also maybe change the shape of the soap dish ...to look more detailed I mean. It took me a while to figure out it was a soap dish...it is too flat I think.
cowmasta13
I though it said "nipple kyrponite" at first, but after I read it correctly, it's a very funny idea/concept.
mochiqueen
haha i didn't get it for a while, but now that i do, 'tis quite clever!
levarris
i understood as soon as I saw it what it meant...I think you'd be fine leaving it the way it is. I didn't notice the bubble count OR shape of the soap dish until I read people's comments. My first impression is how I'll score it...5
nekoama
It's a hilarious idea, but the fact that the perspective's off is the first thing I noticed and is bugging the shit out of me. Still - LOL
Nilla
I hate hippies because they smell like dirt. Dirty beatnicks. LOL
That being said i love this shirt. 5
Jo$h
i hate the bubles and the dish. but this is great!
facetious
Man, everyone around here likes trashin' the poor hippies. I don't like the orange and green together. 3.
facetious
Well, actually, I mostly just don't like that green.
siezexthisday
now i get it! different colour combo would be nice and the design is quite funny
wham_bam
What about "Mary-Kate Olsen Kryptonite"?
I like hippes.
agentrrh
i LOoooooooooooooooooooooooooove this ! ! ! soap is my enemy
vanbox
I'd buy it on a navy , brown, or black shirt! Very funny!
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