The butterfly effect
Let me be the first to say that it would be better without the text. The title bit is too big adn distracting, the text underneath isn't well written. Without those, it's quite appealing.
Let me be the first to say that it would be better without the text. The title bit is too big adn distracting, the text underneath isn't well written. Without those, it's quite appealing.
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pepto dismal
i like the design and even the text beneath the design is tolerable but the 'butterfly effect' makes me cringe. i dont want to wear something that will remind me or others of ashton keutcher. 4. $5 without 'butterfly affect'.
velvetsamurai
i like the guy and the curly stuff around him, but i wish the butterflies werent jus the same one cut and pasted. The text doesnt bother me, because its tasteful and not in your face.
3 for now, but if the butterflies were to change it woul be a 5
Glittermummy
I agree with cambert. Lose the text, for a quaintly odd design, instead of one trying to explain itself.
tenytini
if you nixed the text and maybe had the butterflies go up over the collar bone as if it were wrapping around. I love everything else about it. I'll take the dark brown one!
blowinbublesooo
agreed, get rid of the text. i would not want to be associated with the movie.... gah, that movie was terrible!
scoutti
great idea and illustration
but i'd like to see no text
and more variation in the sizes of the butterflies.
djphonic
I'd also add that the path that the butterflies are going in is pretty ugly.
fiddlywink46
Id say: I like it on the brown shirt, and keep the bottom text, but not the "butterfly effect" text. you do that and Id buy it =)
SCHOSR_I
I adore the little guy with the stuff around him, but the text, just kills it.
Make him bigger, and make the butterflies wrap around.
acrystalvillage
yea.. no text. 5 without
larchie
I don't mind the text underneath... In fact, I even like it. But that title part has GOT to go.
leleana
Yeah, lose the title. The text below, I'm a little unsure of. I do like it though :)
redsugar
I don't like the "butterfly effect" but I'm ok with the text at the bottom because it's so small, and I like the thought. But you spelled "surprised" wrong.
CuteLittleFaery
I like the text at the bottom, it's cute but unobtrusive.
grapefruitmonkey
don't like the text at all and there are way too many butterflies. you have a good start though.
Gaylee
Text at bottm is fine, but, as others have said, the title isn't necessary. And is that Chuck Mangione? I like this shirt.
AlliT
I absolutely LOVE the part at the bottom with the man and the flower, (minus the text). I'm not too fond of the butterflies in general, but would definitely buy a shirt with the man's scene as the central theme. It's just beautiful. Simple and beautiful.
elfprincess0624
I love love love love love this but really the text needs to go..
inayellowsub
awww man
please get rid of that text!
its brilliant otherwise.
berg14
Totally awesome
Annamary
Maybe one butterfly and no "butterfly effect" text. The rest is awesome - nice job!
at it destruction
very awesome, but the "butterfly effect" text really takes away from the overall design.........
CLSnodgrass86
I love the brown and blue...Its gorgeous.
5$
ElectricStar
the design is awesome, id wear it.... but the text takes away frm the design.
angiejammy
yep text has gotta go
cat_harp548
as many others have said....i LOOOVEEEEE it...but the text takes away from it
ledisko__x
its nice.
kreally.
but the text ruins it kindof..
because its wayyy too small
&& i hate getting asked what my shirt says
ALL THE TIME;
muchluv.E>
tateroz
I agree with the others, lose the text. Other than that, I love it.
mandylion77
i dont think all of the text needs to go, only the huge text that says the butterfly effect.
DaintyBuffalo
Lose the big text
YtFeLMi
keep the bottom text, but get rid of the "butterfly effect". fix the butterflies. too many, and too many of the same ones. other than that, i want this!
d.profound
It made me think of http://www.e-sheep.com/chrysalis/. You should all go read it. It's pretty cool.
slightlyfaezed
i'm glad i have the good fortune of predicting weather patterns coming to mind before an ashton kutcher movie, you poor sods :P
kamisch42
That's my shirt! When's this being printed?! I want it :)
It could do without the quote on the bottom, but even with it - who cares, I like it...especially the blue on brown, which is weird because I don't wear many brown shirts. Pale pink could also work well this, no? $5
Moçambique
nice piece of draw....without type would be better.
Kiltsareawesome
it would be awesomew without the butterfly effect text. The quote is cool though.
Wixywaxy
I agree! I would give it a 5$ without the butterfly-effect-text...
letsbeheros
it would look better without "the butterfly effect" and i wouldn't put as many butterflies, otherwise it's pretty cute, and i really like the quote.
CemetaryDriveIn
great shirt;
i love everything about it except get rid of "the butterfly effect"
4&id buy it.
its still coool.
kissingaudrey
Ditto everyone else. I really like the design, I would lose the text.
PenthousePete
ARCADE FIRE. DISCUSS.
p_f
lose the text, mate.
ds198
I agree: no butterfly effect title is needed, it just brings up memories of that movie. If you spent more time with the bottom text, i think it would work, but this text isn't very meaningful.
mp3
no title, there is a dodgy band by thet name in australia too
xbigxox
i like it except for the text.. itd be real cute otherwise
coolhandcarter
sweet, if only the type was all under the trumpet fella. 3
Bachelder
I say lose the "butterfly effect" text, and rather than have the butterflies go up in such a delineated pattern, maybe make them slightly more random?
I do love this design; I just think it needs some tweaking.
StaneStane
Looks like some festival promo... actualy I have seen better festival promos...
darren717
Echhk, hell no.
Butterfliers and their ilk be damned to an everlasting hell.
WhatisGod
I'd like this better with no text
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