nice illustration....
i have a few crits that would help make it better:
the somewhat rectangel shape takes away from the oragnic feeling of the park and the silhouette.....round it out more like the left corner...
a few of the elements are a bit too close together...causing compositional-tension [which can be done on purpose for a desired effect, but i dont think it was intended or appropriate for this piece]
ex. the star half behind the foliage and right next to the kid...also the branh is a bit too close to the little girls head....
and there could be a few more smaller stars.....
sorry if i crit this too much, but i only take the time to crit artwork that i like and feel could be improved on........
I like it a lot. only thing I see that might be improved is softening the straight edge of the rectangle like you did the left side. I would probably buy this anyway.
i love the colors, ur design is awesome
this is the best tee i have seen here today
if it doesnt get printed ill by one directly from you
this is absolutely beautiful lets see some more stuff really soon
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.moto.
mmm... i like it. nice colours.
LuckyMissNikki
Gorgeous! It would probably be my new favorite shirt.
over_ran_doubt
that is really, really ill.
LovelyAmy
its a bit dark
DaveGreen
What am i looking at?
talisker
very nice.
nuf said :)
bitterbat
hard to see. lighten the blue just a smidge. nice design!
gravedirt
that's cute. I'm not sure if a bit of text would make it cooler or scre it over...
Cabana
I can't get enough of these silhouette shirts, PRINT IT!
green-means-go
Gorgeous.
Deekinz
I love the colors.
theenjoisk8r
wow, thats nice
em_down
j'aim les colours, mais trop petite.
Spunkified
L L L ove it.
scrybe
Nice. I wish it could be done without the strong borders though.
fastjumper
nice!
powdermonkey
lovelyyy. it is a bit hard to make out, though.
jhstatts
Nice. I'd buy it.
GetFunky
LUV <3 :o)
Ava Adore
very nice
rachel_nyc
awesome. 5.
arie_aroline
in a bigger size, for it is hard to see the figure on the sirt
Luke...
nice illustration....
i have a few crits that would help make it better:
the somewhat rectangel shape takes away from the oragnic feeling of the park and the silhouette.....round it out more like the left corner...
a few of the elements are a bit too close together...causing compositional-tension [which can be done on purpose for a desired effect, but i dont think it was intended or appropriate for this piece]
ex. the star half behind the foliage and right next to the kid...also the branh is a bit too close to the little girls head....
and there could be a few more smaller stars.....
sorry if i crit this too much, but i only take the time to crit artwork that i like and feel could be improved on........
SemantiTheft
Love it, but feel the design should be larger.
quoperate
I like it a lot. only thing I see that might be improved is softening the straight edge of the rectangle like you did the left side. I would probably buy this anyway.
mx2122
very pretty. the picture is hard to make out, but i can tell it well enough.
beautiful concept
MoniqueH
Oh, nostalgic. $5
Spazkake
I'd like the kids to be the color of the moon
megarockman24
nice.
supergrover
very nice. simple.
OHunique
I really like this. Fantastic choice in colors. $5
emmakyoko
i like your tshirt template!
MysticFaerie
This is gorgeous. $5. The only suggestion I have was someon else's suggestion, to just lighten the blue sky a little.
faraway
Nice good work.
BuriedAlive
Very nice. Makes me wish I was still a wee one back in the summer.
Zachsta
$5
DTLA
i love the colors, ur design is awesome
this is the best tee i have seen here today
if it doesnt get printed ill by one directly from you
this is absolutely beautiful lets see some more stuff really soon
5++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
DTLA
dont change the colors at all it reminds me of camping at night in maine
shamus
PROB THE ILLEST T IVE EVER SEEN...HOLY SHIT
Agent _retro
YES!
$5
Love it.
SlitzIya
gotta have it, i'm relaly picky with how i rate things, but this is omg, brings back so many memories
$5
songbirdsweet
The colors make me happy. Perhaps a bit dark and a bit small, but overall I adore it.
ThePretentious
Wouldn't change a thing
Klayr
Nostalgic. I love ittt~
SoFarAway00
LOOOOOOOOOOOVE
just make it bigger
five and buy!
Flachenmann
I absolutely love the concept (very nostalgic and reminds me of good times)
The border is a little to rigid for the organic setting though..
Even then..I'd buy it as it is now
4$
"Midsummer Night's dream"?
RanCiel810
Oooh, another dark, night shirt I love. Gotta have it!
seren
I lovelove it. 4$ I think, 5 if the rectangle wasn't so... rectangular. :)
mamaMarisol
i love it. 4$, but i'd like it better with the graphic a bit bigger
soulDELAY
awww. i want my childhood back. hahaha. je l'adore. =D
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