Yea.. guess you're right. Thought it was pretty good for my first one....

its a nice concept and I like it but you need to make her look like a woman. Give her some breasts,change the face, and her arms look kinda manly to me atleast .

I like the background design. It does look like a man though.

If it's any consoltion, I'd hit it.

Good job on your first try. I hope to see more soon.

she HAS breasts... just because they aren't DDs... :)

smaller arms and bigger head though. good use of color.

arms look a little big for rest of the drawing, but I like it otherwise

i love how the butterflies are behind her but like everyone has already said, she looks like a man.

good job though!

Yea the more I look at it the more she looks like a dude. Oh well. =)

Uh...
Flowers in the Attic part II ????

Maybe a different color scheme.

I'm new though, so ...

if you never saw that design, then this is very good and original.

Ooooh, oooh. I love the design! I would buy it but grey makes me look dead. sniffles Very cool though! :)

Just increase the head size, that's all.

The original image that the body came from was quite feminine, though not voluptuous, and had a head that was proportional to the body. You should have just kept it.

Lady=very masculine.

horrendous

been there, done that.

the colors are lovely

yeah, the lady is kinda out of proportion and does look a bit masculine. It's a great concept, though, and a great start (being your first submission, right?). Anyway, I suck at drawing people, so it's probably way better than anything I could come up with :p

i love it! ... but it's kinda disproportioned :\

who cares if shes out-of-proportion??!


gorgeous.

I thank you all for all the comments i've been recieving. The good ones and the bad!! I've been making a few more shirts.. just waiting to see if they get submitted.

I love it.
I DO.

Something might look odd about her face, though.
You get a 5.


**robert-huston

Great shirt, i'd buy it!

its okay but reminds me too much of "flowers in the attic",even the same placement.

Hey,
Everyone's comments seem to be negative. I understand this is constructive crit, but seriously i love it. all good, and if it's your first try them, holy cow.
Keep 'em coming, seriously.
J

blood sprayed butterflies. hmm I dunno...

looks like micheal jackson.

I thinks its pretty good for your first try -I really like the red background witht he butterflies (pretty), if you slim down the girl and amke her more feminie I'd totally want this t'shirt

it has potential, but I agree with most of the previous comments about her masculinity, and her head looks too small.

Flowers In The Attic.
Manly.
Blood.

2

this seems so...
i dont know how to explain it.
i would never wear this..but i know and am good friends with tons who would.

bigger head. a little more boobage. but don't go crazy..it's close.
i like it..i really do. i just think the whole black and white, blood thing is so overdone..even if you didn't mean for the flutterbys to look like blood.
nice job. especially for a first submission. :)

meh