well... definatetly shrink it down.. and that little pink thing looks a lot like a penis. maybe that was intentional, but uhh.... I'm a not a fan of penis shirts.
Bat, the peg isn't a penis, if you've ever played life you'd know. And Hobo, there are no copyright issues here you're can't really copyright shape, and I'm not mentioning anything about a particular game. But, thanks for the comments! :-)
Tuna, It actually doesn't look that bad up close. AND if you people have played life and we're being so perverse about it :-P then maybe it'd be all good in the hood! But thanks for the comment.
Neat idea. And I disagree on sticking to candyland and candyland only, that sort of kills the text.
I do agree that the peg looks phallic. But what can you really do right? The little bit at the top of the pegs from life are pretty small, and trying to emulate that would take away from the roung cartoony-ness of the image.
I also agree that the graphic would look better smaller. Chest instead of full.
The text doesn't seem to support the images; was there a car or peg in that game? "Life's no game" might be more suited..?? Just comments; graphics wise it's good to look at.
i love the idea (candyland = the best), but it'd be better to keep it all candyland. and the pink thing does look like a penis and i'm not a fan of penis shirts either. other than that, love the idea.
WTF obviously, I now know I can't place a picture in a comment post. Damn!..(but i'll try one last time...) <img src="http://www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/LIFE.jpg" width="265" height="261"> ...whatever
Dude,
If you want to get real feedback as a designer you need to take both the good with the bad. I personally don't have a problem with the "phalic" game piece and I think it's a decent premis but I agree that the entire graphic is too large.
The problem with the pink thing is the fact that the actual game pieces have flattened square bodies, then the little round heads on top. And they aren't that tall in the little cars, just make it sit down a little farther and it won't look so phallic.
Other than that, lose the whole square the text is on, shrink the design, and I'll love it.
And Talierin-I suppose you didn't see my other post up there with this link, www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/LIFE.jpg , that shows, how I did the peg is exactly like it is in the real game. But thanks you for the feed back!
Ian Leino
Really nice job on the game pieces, but the design is enormous, and the text is kind of annoying and overstated.
EddieA
Well its supposed to stand out, its freakin cool :-P jk, but whatever :-) thanks!
Advillian
really nice work on those peices.
xiv
nice design, but i dont think it works well on a t-shirt
EddieA
cool xiv thanks for the input!
batbanana
well... definatetly shrink it down.. and that little pink thing looks a lot like a penis. maybe that was intentional, but uhh.... I'm a not a fan of penis shirts.
HoboMiracleMan
i think you may have some copyright legal issues there buddy
EddieA
Bat, the peg isn't a penis, if you've ever played life you'd know. And Hobo, there are no copyright issues here you're can't really copyright shape, and I'm not mentioning anything about a particular game. But, thanks for the comments! :-)
tunastar
You should have stuck with candyland and candyland only....
...that...peg.
so phallic, and it stands out so well cause it's pink and nothing else is.
EddieA
Tuna, It actually doesn't look that bad up close. AND if you people have played life and we're being so perverse about it :-P then maybe it'd be all good in the hood! But thanks for the comment.
robotsinthegarden
Neat idea. And I disagree on sticking to candyland and candyland only, that sort of kills the text.
I do agree that the peg looks phallic. But what can you really do right? The little bit at the top of the pegs from life are pretty small, and trying to emulate that would take away from the roung cartoony-ness of the image.
I also agree that the graphic would look better smaller. Chest instead of full.
EddieA
Thanks for the comments Robot and actually it's vectored right from a photo I took for referance, so the peg is how it really is in the game. Thanks!
emokidinlove
i see a penis
EddieA
Dammit stop with the penis thing :-P lol and Chameleon, thats where you're wrong it is 4 colors. the pink is white and red real close, a "half tone".
KEMMLER
pssshhh, silly
EddieA
There you go Pavement Chameleon - http://www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/car-peg_detail.jpg
Eva_taka
The text doesn't seem to support the images; was there a car or peg in that game? "Life's no game" might be more suited..?? Just comments; graphics wise it's good to look at.
EddieA
Alright maybe you don't quite get it.
"Sorry"= sorry game piece.
"Life" = car and female peg from the game life.
"Candyland" = gingerbread-man game piece from the game candyland.
emotionalist
i love the idea (candyland = the best), but it'd be better to keep it all candyland. and the pink thing does look like a penis and i'm not a fan of penis shirts either. other than that, love the idea.
EddieA
OMG you guys never played life?
EddieA
Here's the picture of the life car I took for my reference <img src=http://www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/LIFE.jpg>
EddieA
<img src="http://www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/LIFE.jpg">
EddieA
WTF obviously, I now know I can't place a picture in a comment post. Damn!..(but i'll try one last time...) <img src="http://www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/LIFE.jpg" width="265" height="261"> ...whatever
megggan
'ain't no candyland' is kind of white trash and it seems like you could find it at some kind of souveneer shop.
EddieA
Sweet! thats positive feed back, thanks megggan!
EddieA
Thanks. Yeah I'm starting to realize that the graphic IS too large, can little things be modified like that, IF it wins?... Other placement options >
www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/candyland_options.gif
jackwo
Dude,
If you want to get real feedback as a designer you need to take both the good with the bad. I personally don't have a problem with the "phalic" game piece and I think it's a decent premis but I agree that the entire graphic is too large.
ykcir
so cute
Talierin
The problem with the pink thing is the fact that the actual game pieces have flattened square bodies, then the little round heads on top. And they aren't that tall in the little cars, just make it sit down a little farther and it won't look so phallic.
Other than that, lose the whole square the text is on, shrink the design, and I'll love it.
EddieA
Thank you ykcir.
And Talierin-I suppose you didn't see my other post up there with this link, www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/LIFE.jpg , that shows, how I did the peg is exactly like it is in the real game. But thanks you for the feed back!
EddieA
hey.
i think the design is awesome!!!!
such an awesome idea!!!!! very clever!
i hope you win!
cold246
hey the comment i left was in your name....
why did it to do that???
well ppl that last comment was mine^^^
EddieA
AHH!? How weird... But thanks "cold246"
Economos
i like this a lot - but it def. needs to be much smaller, maybe half the size!
EddieA
Thanks a ton Econ, yeah I posted this link before,
www.eddieadolf.com/shirtdesigns/candyland_options.gif
I like the last one.
Springfish
pretty awful. I'd try again dude.
EddieA
Haha, That sound like a pretty good board-game square!
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