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her head is smaller then the rest of her body and looks like a mans.
Yea.. guess you're right. Thought it was pretty good for my first one....
its a nice concept and I like it but you need to make her look like a woman. Give her some breasts,change the face, and her arms look kinda manly to me atleast .
I like the background design. It does look like a man though.
If it's any consoltion, I'd hit it.
Good job on your first try. I hope to see more soon.
she HAS breasts... just because they aren't DDs... :)
smaller arms and bigger head though. good use of color.
arms look a little big for rest of the drawing, but I like it otherwise
i love how the butterflies are behind her but like everyone has already said, she looks like a man.
good job though!
Yea the more I look at it the more she looks like a dude. Oh well. =)
Flowers in the Attic part II ????
Maybe a different color scheme.
I'm new though, so ...
if you never saw that design, then this is very good and original.
Ooooh, oooh. I love the design! I would buy it but grey makes me look dead. sniffles Very cool though! :)
Just increase the head size, that's all.
The original image that the body came from was quite feminine, though not voluptuous, and had a head that was proportional to the body. You should have just kept it.
been there, done that.
the colors are lovely
yeah, the lady is kinda out of proportion and does look a bit masculine. It's a great concept, though, and a great start (being your first submission, right?). Anyway, I suck at drawing people, so it's probably way better than anything I could come up with :p
i love it! ... but it's kinda disproportioned :\
who cares if shes out-of-proportion??!
I thank you all for all the comments i've been recieving. The good ones and the bad!! I've been making a few more shirts.. just waiting to see if they get submitted.
I love it.
Something might look odd about her face, though.
You get a 5.
Great shirt, i'd buy it!
its okay but reminds me too much of "flowers in the attic",even the same placement.
Everyone's comments seem to be negative. I understand this is constructive crit, but seriously i love it. all good, and if it's your first try them, holy cow.
Keep 'em coming, seriously.
blood sprayed butterflies. hmm I dunno...
looks like micheal jackson.
I thinks its pretty good for your first try -I really like the red background witht he butterflies (pretty), if you slim down the girl and amke her more feminie I'd totally want this t'shirt
it has potential, but I agree with most of the previous comments about her masculinity, and her head looks too small.
Flowers In The Attic.
this seems so...
i dont know how to explain it.
i would never wear this..but i know and am good friends with tons who would.
bigger head. a little more boobage. but don't go crazy..it's close.
i like it..i really do. i just think the whole black and white, blood thing is so overdone..even if you didn't mean for the flutterbys to look like blood.
nice job. especially for a first submission. :)