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alsatiandarn
alsatiandarn on Feb 13 '12
A hella happy umbrella!
izzyrb
izzyrb on Feb 13 '12
I would change the color of the shirt or lightening the blue because i had a hard time making the whole image out. Also, what is the thing underneath the umbrella?
jonorr
jonorr on Feb 13 '12
I would move the eyes up and make the back of the umbrella match the front. It should be scalloped on both sides. I like the colors, which really pop on that purple.
txz6
txz6 on Feb 13 '12
I agree with the eyes hight and the semicircles around the back.

I like the happy face, keep it up, you are almost there.

Please if you have time, check out my design, i appretiate your opinion: Bread Jump
maccar
maccar on Feb 14 '12
Like the idea, but the rain is a bit difficult to see.

If you get a chance my design is up for scoring and comments!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/401868/CAT
maccar
maccar on Feb 14 '12
Like the idea, but the rain is a bit difficult to see.

If you get a chance my design is up for scoring and comments!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/401868/CAT
3 days later
txz6
txz6 on Feb 18 '12
Hey, thanks for your comments, my design is now up for scoring, If you have time, please help me with your score at: Bread Jump Score
rav3ndesign
rav3ndesign on Feb 18 '12
Hey there, just a suggestion you could outline the raindrops baby-blue or maybe even white to stand out better.
My first design is up for critique comments please.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/99910/Hot_Magenta
mackthreads
mackthreads on Feb 18 '12
nice idea pal, i would suggest to paly aorund with some colors in background for the tshirt...
i agree with txz6.. i feel u almost there.. keep it up!


Plz critique if u have time
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