This is the original sketch I did. I'm working on a much classier t-shirt version, prolly on a dark background with a little illumination of the light, but does anyone have comments on the concept?

I would work on the scanned lines and make it more crisp and clean. And i would get rid of the lamp, it doesn help the design look better.

I'd like to see it against a t shirt but I think you should keep the lamp but just darken the color and brighten the colors of the light

I love the concept as it is, but i would like to see the placement. Keep the light, let me know when the version you are working on is ready, I would love to see it.

Please if you have time, check out my design, i appretiate your opinion: Bread Jump

I love the design and I kind of like the hand drawn look. Like christian said I'd work on the lines try to clean them up a bit, but it's a cool design!

Could you comment on my designs?
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