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Andeeroo
Andeeroo on Feb 13 '12
I'd be fine with the simulated process printing if need be.
wlpalmer13
wlpalmer13 on Feb 13 '12
Like the idea behind the shirt maybe make it look a little more abstract and in some kind of form more reminiscent of the actual northern lights. Keep it up.

Please comment on my design if you get a chance Thanks

http://www.threadless.com/critique/99652/Faith_in_Music
coryduran
coryduran on Feb 13 '12
I like the design but I don't like that it's limited just to that triangle, i'd like to see the design opened up and fleshed out a bit more. Sweet concept though.

Could you give mine a look?
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Christian223
Christian223 on Feb 13 '12
It would be even cooler with a darker shirt. and a yellow triangle, like the space ghost logo.

Please critique my design too! :)
saxyttugal
saxyttugal on Feb 13 '12
I really love the artwork! I agree with coryduran though, the design needs to breathe a little more

BRB
agehawk
agehawk on Feb 13 '12
That's a really nice painting. Great colour choices. I'm not sure about the triangle though, it seems like it's hindering the main element, instead of cropping it in an interesting way. If it's essential for the design, I'd at least move the wolf up a bit inside it.

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txz6
txz6 on Feb 14 '12
I agree with the triangle, but love the design, maybe you can use a darker tshirt color as Christian said (navy or black) and just loose the triangle and it might look really nice. Let me know if you make another version i would like to see it, I really liked your concept.

Please if you have time, check out my design, i appretiate your opinion: Bread Jump
lele_tranquillity
lele_tranquillity on Feb 15 '12
really cool! the colors are awesome!
maybe you can fill the empty space below with something like a small write?
lele_tranquillity
lele_tranquillity on Feb 15 '12
i forgot it, if you have time please pass and leave a comment ;)
AJayAirplane
AJayAirplane on Feb 15 '12
I'd replace the triangle if keeping it, not a fan of it cutting off the wolf.
behindinfinity
behindinfinity on Feb 15 '12
May I ask what your concept is behind the triangle?

I think it's a cool-looking design but I'm not sure how I feel about the triangle. It looks kind of cool but I agree with how others have said that the wolf is cut off a little awkwardly. If you want to keep the triangle, my suggestion is to nudge the wolf up a little bit.
m.camy
m.camy on Feb 15 '12
don't really like the triangle, but the concept is awesome. and the wolf is nicely done.

please score mine if you can
http://www.threadless.com/submission/401836/Gear_Horse
jjaurili
jjaurili on Feb 16 '12
Love the wolf! Instead of the triangle, maybe just try having "outer space" in the background. Can you please critique my design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/99849/Mr_Mom
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