This is a new concept I'm working on, Inspired by the amazing game - Skyrim! rnrnHere's the first, VERY ROUGH sketch. rnJust to show the composition and pose. rnrnWhat do you think? Should I go on and see it through? :)

In case my handwriting is not understandable...
It's a wood stork flying and holding a blanket with a baby dragon in it.
The dragon is playing with a dovakim's helmet:)

I'd say go on and see it through, could come out really awesome.

Could you please vote and comment on my design?
Samurai

ok than, i'll keep at it:)

So here's some progress:)

Here's the stork in all it's glory! (minus colors and shadows of course). Next think on my to draw list is the baby Alduin! :)

I think this will be a 3, 4 color design. on white:)

Love to hear your thoughts so far!

Very nice stork design. I've never played Skyrim and I still think it resonates.
Keep going!

Thanks for your comment man! :)

This is a great illustration! You've done an awesome job!

Can't wait to see it finished! :)

Great detail!

This definitely came a long way from the original sketch, I'm excited to see how the dragon will turn out.

Just wondering, are you planning on adding color or is this going to be a black and white design?

If you don't mind check out my design

Nested Ghoult

thanks for the kind words:)

I'm considering colors...lol...I know I don't want it to be with lots of colors cause I like the how the white and the black comes together in the stork...But I might add a third color for shadows and perhaps another one for just a little bit of "spotlighted" areas:)

i like this picture, would you consider trying some color? it's cool though.
if you have a chance please check out mine
http://www.threadless.com/submission/401836/Gear_Horse

It definitely needs color
if you have time could you take a look at mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/99828/Never_Mind_Angel_Here_s_Spike

some more progress:)

almost done with the basic lines and flats...
soon will move on to some fine shadows and background...

Any Skyrim fan here? what do you think?

Some more progress and placement:)

Its really hard to read, I would replace those dark colors for lighter ones. Its hard to understand imo.

Would you critique my design?.

does anyone else thinks it's hard to read? and which colors? the blacks or the grays?

bump

I think its too dark on some places and with the black outlines its all making a big chunk of darkness which is very hard to read. Try replacing the parts with dark colors with a lighter version of that color. I hope that helps.

It doesn't look too dark to me. I think especially at print size it would probably look great. I'm glad you fleshed this out from the original sketch too it's coming along well. If you wanted to play with the colors you could just to see if you can get even more of a popping visual experience, but it's good.


Could you check out my design that's in the voting process?
Birds

thanks:)

i really like the composition. my eye is brought in by the open wings and guided down to the helmet in a nice 's' curve. the dragon seems a bit flat around where the head overlaps the tail. could possibly introduce some shading? also the dragon's wings seem a bit too static.

thanks for that!
I am going to add shadows...:)
i'll try to see about the wings:)

Thanks for your score! I think this is a great graphic, but I'm not familiar with Skyrim. I really like the detail in the bird's wings. I wish you the best!

tnx:)

really original!!
i'd wear it!!
if you want check out my first design please!
Brain_Switch

I agree on the dragon something needs to be done to make it pop out

Maybe just needs some shading? As for the rest great illustration!

COOL IDEA!!!
Keep at it!
Yeah the dragon needs to pop more - or just make him bigger then the stork if that is possible!

Please look at mine - just uploaded a new version
Mosaic Eye

It will look great with that shades that you said.
My design is up for scoring
please, give me 5

ya its a bit hard to read, whats in the dragons tail? id make the colours on the dragon brigther/bolder to make it stand out from the pelican or whatever that is

could u please critique mine here

This is just awesome :) The only thing I have to say is that the dragon looks flat and the stork has depth. Maybe just add some shading to the dragon to give it depth to match the stork. Could you please help critique my design.
I LOVE YOU

awesome design and i agree with the shading hey can u check out mine design i need some opinion over http://www.threadless.com/critique/100039/shuriken_flames

Hi,
Thank so much for helping out with my critque, I am now up for scoring! So can you please help me out with some votes and I will do the same for you.
Cheers Ez.

http://threadless.com/submission/404356/Gingerbread_Ladies_Man

Thanks everyone!
I'll get back on this design within the next few days...had to take a break due to some other pressing projects:)

Added shadows and highlights to Alduin (The dragon)

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RUN CHEESE WHEEL!

Added shades and highlight and background...
What do you think? is it ready? Or should I do some more changes?

The details are sick. I think it's ready for submission.

thanks:) anyone else agrees?

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really cool piece. I think the dragon's lower half is getting sort of lost against the mountain. values are too similar.

So I think it's pretty much done...Do you agree...should I submit now? :)

Skyrim fans unite!:)

i like the design maybe add more of a dark feel to it like some nice shady clouds or something but its still good for submit :) check my critique out plz

i like the design maybe add more of a dark feel to it like some nice shady clouds or something but its still good for submit :) check my critique out plz

i like the design maybe add more of a dark feel to it like some nice shady clouds or something but its still good for submit :) check my critique out plz

bump for love:)

Definitely looks better with the lighter mountain, it's easier to make out all of the details of the dragon.

Ok so added some thicker lines to the dragon and added more noise to the background to make it into a snow storm...I think it's ready now...agree?

Skyrim fans unite!:)

Good to go :)

I'm wondering if I should make the mountains on the front more visible like in the previous version?

I find the mountains in V8 a bit distracting actually - looks better without :)

super ready !!!
good luck
crit mine pelasE! crit pizza time please

thanks! :)
So more people more! is my Thum strong enough for submission? :)

Hey, Thanks for your nice comments on my design, it is now up for scoring. Please if you have time help me out by scoring it at:
Brain_Switch

so much nice detail. Why not more colour? the dragon is a bit lost in the grey. Really nice line work

Man This has been a long process...Here's a new option for the mountains...
Is this the one?:)

wow, great job!
maybe you could decrease the thickness of the line of the mountain (in the lower left) to merge it with the background.

if you want could you please help me?

beautifully done. I would submit
please vote on this Thanks!

Awesome! But I would do something to make dragon`s face more visible.


You can check mine, if you want to

So I've made the mountains lines less thick and fixed the white transition some more...and added shadows and highlights to make the head of Alduin (The dragon) jump out some more...
I think there is nothing more to be done but submitting it and letting my Thum be heard...What say you? :)

So I've made the mountains lines less thick and fixed the white transition some more...and added shadows and highlights to make the head of Alduin (The dragon) jump out some more...
I think there is nothing more to be done but submitting it and letting my Thum be heard...What say you? :)

So I've made the mountains lines less thick and fixed the white transition some more...and added shadows and highlights to make the head of Alduin (The dragon) jump out some more...
I think there is nothing more to be done but submitting it and letting my Thum be heard...What say you? :)

So I've made the mountains lines less thick and fixed the white transition some more...and added shadows and highlights to make the head of Alduin (The dragon) jump out some more...
I think there is nothing more to be done but submitting it and letting my Thum be heard...What say you? :)

Score Dragonborn

In case you were wondering how the first dragon was born�why, just like humans�on a stork! (though suiting a dragon, his was a badass wood stork).
This was inspired by the great game, Skyrim!
5 color print on white shirt (The background texture is also made of small solid color strokes).

Score Dragonborn

great work, i'll score right now ^^

Could u take a look at my design too? Give peace a chance

Thanks! it's up!:) Score!:)

FUS RO DA BUMP!

Dovahkiin bump:)

Bump for hope!

bump for skyrim

bumpidi bump bump bump:)

bump:)

Almost done bump

Good luck! I scored your design :)

If you get a chance please score mine

Great job! Good luck!

If you have time:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/100589/Juggler
http://www.threadless.com/critique/100631/Baby_Saturn

two more day bump! thanks everyone! commented and scored as well:)

last day! please vote:)

Voted. Good luck.

Check this out please http://www.threadless.com/submission/407792/Matter_of_Grey

dayum... this is some goood shit :D

mind giving my design a look? :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/100672/Heart_puzzle

and voted XD