any tips or advice as to what I could do to improve this would be great! =) Hopefully, I'll be able to submit this without too many changes.

Great design skills, you should go for it.

Also, thank you for commenting my design, based on your comments i have made some changes to my design, would you mind checking them out and give me your new opinion, Thank you for your time:
Bread Jump

Nice love it as is

The only thing that I would say is to maybe take out the little moon or "C" or whatever it is in the upper left hand corner - it draws the eye away from the owls a bit. Other than that, looks great!

Nice!. I don't like that it changes so much in value, is it done in pencil?, maybe try making it a more refined version with vectors, it would look better imo. I would also put the moon between the bird, it does not look right so far away.

Would you check my designs too?

I'd try to make the moon stand out a little bit more, I didn't even notice it until I read someone's comments, unless that's what you want then by all means success! I like the art work though, I'd say it looks pretty solid.

Could you look at mine?
Kikuchiyo
Keep Reaching

We'll probably take the moon out :P it looks odd on the shirt.

Yea take the moon out. Its fantastic other than that :) I would buy it if it were on a guy's tee.

Critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/99791/Memories

Agreeing with the comments about the moon. :)

Otherwise, great illustration!

Hey, thank you for your nice comments on my design, It is now up for scoring. Please if you have time, help me with your score at: Bread Jump Score

nice!!


if u have time plz hav ur commnets on my final design..
Notebookpages

odd numbers work best make a smaller one and large one and a moon and have them all diff sizes.

Whoooo loves owls? I do! Really. Super quiet night flyers. Amazing creatures. The detail looks great, like it could be branches or roots. The only thing is maybe you could zoom the graphic in a little so we can see the detail. Great graphic!
If you have time, would you help me out by scoring my submission in the running? Thanks so much!

I agree, the moon isn't doing much there, but overall really beautiful!!!
I would vote for this :D

Hey guys, so this design's up for scoring with a few revisions!! If you could vote for it here (Preferably with a $5) That'd be great!!! http://www.threadless.com/submission/405363/Creations_of_Nature

this shirt is awesome i like the design the owl has
can u give mine feedback id appreciate it
http://www.threadless.com/critique/100033/O_W_L