just like making graffiti in giraffes... what do you think guys?

the giraffes are cute. whats the point though?

I really like this concept. Try this on a different color shirt just to see how it plays up the color.

I have a lot of progress to make on mine but let me if you have any suggestions.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/99659/Redefine_Happiness

The man looks like he's standing in the air. Also, all giraffes patterns are different, and from what I can tell the front two giraffes have the same patterns. I'd like to see placement on a shirt. Looks like youre on the right track with this though!
MURDER

Maybe you can just leave one giraff and, as above, work on the flying man. Good idea.

If you have time, please check out my design, i would like to hear your opinion: Bread Jump

funny!!!! i realy like the idea. try another shirt colour!!

I Have a design up for voting, please check it out! It's Zelda Inspired! Don't mess with the chickens

now i changed the tee color.. add some elements.. what do you think guys?

I love the changes you made! Changing the shirt color really enhanced the overall playfulness of the shirt.

Have you thought about making the overall design bigger? I'm having some trouble making it out from far away!

could you please maybe check out my design?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/99624/Eye_Candy
thanks!

Ok, it does look better than v1. Shirt color is good. I'm not sure I like the sign, and the man still looks like hes standing in the air.
MURDER v2

i still need to figure out how i can work out this design,. any help?

Its best to work in odd numbers. How about just three giraffes? One blank one? Then you could make the design bigger on the shirt :)

^ im thingking about that.. thanks! how about the sign? what do you think guys?

i like this! cool idea, i like the sign. but maybe three instead of 4, i would like the design bigger.

please score mine if you can
http://www.threadless.com/submission/401836/Gear_Horse

OK. only 3 giraffes.. changed the sign.. made it bigger in shirt.. what do you think guys?

Good to go - very cute!

Please - Can you critique and score mine?
Mosaic Eye

Hey, thanks for your comments on my design. The Shirt looks good on that color and also I think the 3 Giraffes are way better, I still think the guy is flying around, maybe try something like a floor or a stand at the middle. here is an example I hope it helps Ladder

Other than that i like the desing

Ha! Really cute design! I think once you fix the guy on the ladder, it will be good to go. Can you check out my design, http://www.threadless.com/critique/99849/Mr_Mom

Super cute design haha, I really like it. The guy on the ladder does look awkward but I didn't even think about it until I saw someone else post about it, so eh?

Could you vote and comment on my submission?
Birds

The yellow really pops on that blue! The guy on the later does look a bit awkward. He looks a little stiff.


Prehistoric Pity

Hey, my design is now up for scoring, If you have time, please help me with your score at: Bread Jump Score

This is a great concept! Love it. The middle giraffe with guy painting it is strong enough graphically to stand on its own. I would experiment with losing the sign along the left and right giraffe.
If you have time, would you help me out by scoring my submission in the running? Thanks so much!

Nice i like it!!!looks good, you could add some cloud there!!
Plz check mine if you have a minute, thank you!

ok, i fixed the man.. what do you think guys?

I like the concept it's funny and cute, looks great on the blue background also. Well done :)

I like it its very well done, I'd say you nailed on the painter.

The painter looks much better. Really cute design! Could you check out my design: http://www.threadless.com/critique/100064/Elephant_Trunks

Cute concept, and I really have just one thing to crit on; the blank giraffe - change the legs, so it looks different from painted giraffe. With a simple design like this, you can't afford to be lazy. And nobody likes copies.

The first giraffe looks like he is proud and the last giraffe cant be proud as he doesn't have his spots yet so he should look different. The sign needs more work, maybe shape it like an arrow and get rid of the black house silhouette. Great idea, looking awesome.

Cool design, much improved over the first versions. Not sure about the sign! Its not really telling me anything other than the giraffe is in da house. Maybe do as phauxe says and make it an arrow shape.

Thanks for the feedback.

I agree with inkdummy.

As do I. Nice design though.

Awesome design idea. The artwork is good and I like the colour tee. I think the Giraffe on the far left is good, but i they all look the same besides the spots... The one getting painted should probably have both legs on the ground and one eye open looking down at the paint job. The one on the far right should be happy with an I open with its legs in different way and then I think you got it.

Need help with my design please leave a comment

broken link sorry http://www.threadless.com/critique/98345/Game_Over

Hi,
Thank so much for helping out with my critque, I am now up for scoring! So can you please help me out with some votes and I will do the same for you.
Cheers Ez.

http://threadless.com/submission/404356/Gingerbread_Ladies_Man

I like the idea. I agree though that you should change the sign and that each of the giraffes should look different.

thanks guys! i will make the changes and would probably upload another version this friday. thanks again!

it's a been long time.. i fixed the design based on the comments in the previous version. The design is not yet finish. What do you think guys?

I LOVE this concept! The expressions make the difference in v5 but I think you should work on the shape of the giraffe heads and maybe add some white to their eyes. Maybe some shadowing to ground them a bit and maybe show us tee placement and scale. It's all about minor tweak now - great job!

AWESOME!

maybe some shadows??
:)

if you have time: check it out and give me feecback: http://www.threadless.com/critique/102622/quot_EARTH_quot

thanks for you comments guys!

This is just a thought: why don't you put different color spots on the giraffe to imatate actual graffitti. And instead of having a paint brush in the man's hand, have a a spray can. Go a little more urban with it.

I love this. My wife suggested trying a less saturated yellow . I think its great either way!

^do you mean make the brightness of yellow lesser?

Really nice. Second vote for the spray can...please vote on mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/102824/Morton_F_Bombs

I agree with the idea of a spraycan and some simple shading. But very awesome idea! :)

thanks! i'm still thinking is spraycan will work on this..

thanks! i'm still thinking IF spraycan idea will work on this..

I don't think spray can is necessary. I think thats too tied to the title of the submission, which wouldnt be known to those just seeing the shirt. Yes to the question about brightness of the yellow -- but we both laughed out loud and love it as it is. Face expressions priceless.

I'd be happy if you score my design: Small Talk

The third giraffe should look hopeful, not sad

I agree the waiting giraffe would look on with anticipation. I also don't think a spray can is necessary. Almost there!

Please - if you have some time, I would really appreciate your scoring on my design, thanks: Buttons the Invincible

Make the paintbrush more visible,as now it's just the same colour as the giraffe. :)

Hey there, I like the idea and the progress you've made. I think the way you drew the giraffes before is better. These guys seem kind of pudgy and don't quite look like giraffes to me. It's cool overall though.

And I think the paint brush is fine.

Paintbrush should be a different color that the giraffe, and maybe some shadows would be nice.

Hope you have chance to score my design Pigs are flying

ok. i fixed the facial expression of the third giraffe, add some shadows. fixed the painter.. and some details.. what do you think guys? i'm thinking to submit this next week..

Great work with this design. It's definitely come a long way. My only suggestion would be to think about the colors. RIght now I feel like my eyes are vibrating inside my head because of the bright yellow and the deep blue and I think it takes my attention away from the design. That might just be me though. Keep playing with it and I could see this being an amazing tee!

I hate to be that guy, but if you have some time can you please score my design?
http://www.threadless.com/submission/421229/The_Perfect_Wave
thanks a bunch!

Nice idea :) I also think that the colors are too contrasty, maybe try light blue. And spots on a giraffe could be smoother.

Nice idea! my gf like it a lot, submit it!
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Totaly submit it!! love the idea!
how about you making all the necks longer?

any chance you can check out my design?
Here's mine

The idea is good, but the art is not up to quality. Keep working on it though!

how about placing this design in a green tee?

I love the green tee....I think Green is better.
If you have time, pls help to comment mine.

The Green Tee I best. Is there a way that you could change the paint brush to a spray can like the artist is doing street art. I know that you have a good concept going and it would change things up a lot to move in a different direction but it would be kind of cool if you could have the one that looks so proud in the middle of the other two. The other two would look like normal Giraffes and then the one that is in the middle looking proud is all tagged up with little nods to great street artist ( Obey, Banksy, Space Invader) and the one in the middle would almost wear them like tattoos he is so proud of them. I know that may not be what you are conveying here and I am not saying your idea is bad, I just think that concept would really fit your title. If you don't like that then forget about it, my only real suggestion is have the painter have a spray can not a paint brush.



If you would not mind critiquing mine:
I Play a Mean Guitar

I like this version!
check my critique please MOTHERSHIP REVENGE

well i'm actually thinking of another title for this design.. any suggestions?

how about Giraffe 101?

thanks for your suggestions but I think i will just stick to the design.. I just need to change the title into a more appropriate title for this one.. what do you think guys?

Really cute. Nice execution, too. Submit*

Tight, just be careful with some of the legs shape, like the hind legs of the giraffe to the left.

pls check mi critique link texthttp://www.threadless.com/critique/102981/moon_wind

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still don't know how to link text :( http://www.threadless.com/critique/102981/moon_windlink text

how about the title? what do you think guys?

your design reminds me a production line. what about something like "Giraffactory"?

if you have a moment, I could use your vote and comments on my design:
Do as me say, Not as me do

hmm.. a very good suggestion my friend... thanks!

you are very welcome :-)

That's a "submit this" for me !
Very clever idea !!

thanks guys! i'm planning to submit this tomorrow.. with regards to the title im torn between - giraffe 101 and Giraffactory... what do you think guys? any suggestions?

I like it but I think it would work better for baby stuff... definitely I see my baby wearing this xD

Please I you feel like, critique my design Birdy

Submit! :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/102622/quot_EARTH_quot

I prefer Giraffactory.

mmm, I like it but i feel like there is something missing, can't tell what it is!

good idea, but the art is clipart-like... and the giraffe is really huge :D

(if you have a sec)
sceptical llama

I like the concept and the color choices but you need a little more character in your graphics. Make them more "YOU" add a little personalized touch to it. This reminds me of another Threadless shirt "light Painter"

Voice your opinion if you have the time.

Kool-Aid

I think there is a bit of a mismatch in the graphics here. The giraffes are cute and whimsical where the man on the ladder is more realistic. I'd like for him to look a bit more whimsical so that he is a better match. Also, I'm all about Giraffactory for the name. :)

If you have time, please take a look at my tee! Flip the Bird

thanks guys for your comments.. i'll try to make some twists here and upload a newer version tomorrow... hope i can upload this by the end of this week :)

Very Super. I Loved It

If you have time, please take a look at my tee!

what do you think guys? do i still need to change the painter?

if you decide to add a spray can your worker is going to have to look a little more street. (hoodie etc) you may as well keep the brush. I think you could add some shadow to the giraffe's ?? but overall the design is good.

if you have time please check mine.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/103270/Pillow_Fight_Round_2

i'm planning to submit this tomorrow.. with the title "Giraffactory" hope you will support me guys!

My design is now up for scoring. Please comment and score:
Giraffactory

Love the idea and major improvements from the first version. Submit!!

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Ehm.. In case you're not arabic or persian, I'd say the giraffe should be walking to the right. Primarly because that's what most people associate with forward.